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By : tana97
  • From Nikte on January 24, 2009
    Wow, so they finally got married, I think the whole thing wasn
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  • From cravedom on January 24, 2009
    Well, look at you still adding twists to the story! George, Minister? Fred's death did upset the balance of nature. I hope George never develops a taste for politics,it just seems wrong. On the other hand he is a natural leader... Oh well thats probably a whole new story (hint).


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  • From RoseKelly on January 24, 2009
    Poor George. Good chapter.
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  • From cravedom on January 21, 2009
    Gezz this two are so sensitive!

    Oh I love the idea of Draco/George! Evidently there is something fishy about Draco not passing his tests and I know George will be wonderful and getting justice. It is really neat how little by little Severus has been integrated to the family and how much more relax he seems. I bet Severus is happy he wont be teaching Lucy, she does not seem inclined to follow rules.

    You did good, this Christmas chapter was sweet but not fluffy.
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  • From Nikte on January 19, 2009
    Wow, the "reclaiming" was really hot, I just loved it. I also loved Lucy, she seems like a really lively child, and hopefully she will get Severus to help her get George and Draco together soon. About that last comment for Severus OUCH!!!!!!!!! I mean, I
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 19, 2009
    Oh wow that was just great and I didnt expect that Draco would like Goerge
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  • From padme82 on January 18, 2009
    Oh snap. What a wonderful chapter but such a sad last line. Loved it though.

    -- snow
    padme82@yahoo.com
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  • From mls1971 on January 18, 2009
    loved the new chapter!!!!!!!! hope you update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From munesanzun on January 14, 2009
    awww yay~! harry didn't make the same mistake!! xD And that seems so fitting for the bas*cough* charlie... xD YAY!!
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  • From pacergal84 on January 13, 2009
    Oh, I love so many things about this story.

    I love how Harry came to Severus' rescue.
    I love how they come together.
    I love how Severus is slowly getting his old self back.
    I love how Charlie got his come-uppance.
    But, mostly, I love how Severus is becoming snarky again. The little comments he says are great.

    Keep it up. I feel the end coming. But i'm loving it just the same.
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  • From ANON - countess zero on January 13, 2009
    i also really like your story. there are many interesting ideas, and harry's despair is very touching. your idea of snape with kohl rimmed eyes was nice - a hint of lawrence of arabia - and sexy.

    but the dialogues tend to be a bit wooden. no offense - but is there a beta reader? i noticed some typos, grammatical mistakes ... little things really and easy to correct, but uncorrected they hinder the flow of the story a bit, and that's a pity.

    thank you for writing so much and updating!


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  • From Spiceholmes on January 12, 2009
    Wait (let me clean my tears) k I'm done, that was a really beautiful chapter. Keep them coming I'm hook on this story and I feel that your not writing fast enough for us, but even if your not writing fast enough we are still going to wait until you have a change and post.....so keep them coming.
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  • From ANON - moo on January 12, 2009
    cool spell....esclavitud....slavitude scrambled right? why is there a c in it?
    love the fic!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 11, 2009
    I love this story so much!!! I was going crazy a little when I saw that you were taking so long to review. Now that the annoying dragon has been vanquished, at least for the moment; all that's left is preggy!Sev and another wedding, right?
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  • From Nikte on January 11, 2009
    Finally Molly openned up her eyes!!!!!!!!!!!! I
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