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Reviews for Esclavitud *Now Complete*

By : tana97
  • From cravedom on December 22, 2008
    I knew it! Man being a slave really sucks. Imagination is not my thing but a title about Mimi crying would fit and not give away the plot.


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  • From Dracoroxmaisox on December 22, 2008
    OMG....OMG.....OMG
    stupid Ron...whyyyyyyyyy. i liked him in this story!!!!!!!!!
    i know i know he's desperate but stillllll...
    lol it was a really good chapter!!!! very compelling and heart wrenching!!
    can't wait until the next one!!!
    Kyle
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  • From ANON - thegrimreaper on December 22, 2008
    Castrate Weasley, PLEASE!!!
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  • From k9asylum on December 21, 2008
    Title for 16???? Seems like Ron is guilty of the same sin he accused Harry of so how about "Sanctimous Hypocrite Asshole"?









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  • From Leentjef on December 21, 2008
    post soon
    bye
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  • From ANON - da1datnevawas on December 21, 2008
    Love this story it's one of my favs!

    Keep writing
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  • From Visitkarte on December 21, 2008
    Title? "A teespoon Missing" or "Desparate measures". Ron's lost his mind!
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  • From ANON - Bones on December 21, 2008
    *Bounces up and down* Loved it!!!!!!!!!
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  • From DarkGothic on December 21, 2008
    Interesting story. I just wanna steal snape...and maybe harry....and mimi.....and kreatcher.... yeah lol XD Ron pisses me off he really does, throughout this whole story I've wanted to do nothing but throttle him. A title that could go with Ron and this chapter could be "Look Who's Messing Up Now." Similar (or just like) the movie "Look who's talking now." It's cute but please can someone punch ron like maybe harry or hermione so harry doesn't get in trouble with sev XD
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  • From cravedom on December 17, 2008
    This is so heart melting!

    I wanted to point out that you have managed to have a plot with a sub-plot without having any evil characters and that is unusual and very enjoyable. Well, OK Charlies is an asshole but he is not a megalomanic fiend. The thing is that while the situation is by no means normal, (slavery, magic etc) the characters behavior is very believable. The result is a story that is simply moving.
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  • From Nikte on December 16, 2008
    Yeah, it was a short chapter, but it was really sweet, so I'm not going to complain lol Nevertheless I
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  • From on December 16, 2008
    I love this story and another great chapter!
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  • From Leentjef on December 16, 2008
    this was very very good chapter keep up the good work and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From mls1971 on December 16, 2008
    the new chapters were great!!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!!!1 i hope you update again soon!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - veracityrulesUK on December 16, 2008
    Cheers for the update! Great as usual and can't wait with for the next one.
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