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Reviews for The Mask

By : dragonsgirl
  • From ANON - on July 03, 2016

    i love it !!


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  • From ANON - Adriana on December 01, 2008
    I've been re-reading your stories and I just realised I never reviewed this one! Shame on me haha
    I can't believe this was your first story, it's so good! Just goes to show how talented you are!
    Nice work =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 30, 2008
    That was great. I love! the ending.
    'hi by the way' lol. That's so awesome.
    You did a great job.
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  • From nonentity on October 28, 2008
    "her calling her"-->>"his calling out her" (or "him calling out her"--not sure if that's grammatically okay, but everyone says it that way.)
    blonde-->>blond--it's gender sensitive
    Smashing job. I like that they haven't be harboring tendres for each other over the years. Cute last line. I also like their outfits. Nice, smoking passion came through clearly.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2008
    damn, damn, damn, it sucks to be single and read something like this,,i so want..talk about my faintisy coming to life...damn that was so hot..great story!!!!!!!
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  • From rw18 on October 27, 2008
    Very good! thorougly enjoyed it, and by reviwing i realised i hit the K key instead of the L key on my name haha. oh well.
    good first fic!
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  • From kenzie87 on October 27, 2008
    :D I love it, I love it! So intense! And I love Draco's quips - "oh fuck it", "hi, by the way" - such a fun read!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2008
    LMAO - the "Oh fuck it", kind of said it all, didn't it? Loved that line. Nice build up and I like how we saw each of their perspectives to the lead up of their hot little shag. There's a couple of mistakes there with grammar and punctuation but hey, we've all been there, especially me. LOL Nicely done for your first attempt. :)
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on October 27, 2008
    Nice! Hot, steamy, straight to the point! Good job!
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  • From lily69 on October 26, 2008
    Excellent! Loved it! Do write some more!
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  • From AimeeBass on October 26, 2008
    Awesome one-shot!!!!!! You did a great job I hope to read more from you in the future. Congrats on your first fic!

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