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Reviews for Learning to Trust

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From RoxieRose666 on October 27, 2008
    I've only read a little so far but I like it
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 27, 2008
    I think that you did great your first time out! you will only get better with time so keep at it!!!!!

    Happy Writing, Hon!!!!


    S_G
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  • From voraciousreader on October 27, 2008
    I think it was a bit short, but I liked it very much. Longer chapters might have given you more opportunity to explore the characters and their interactions a bit more. I especially liked the idea of Harry's former lover constantly popping up and causing disruptions--That could have been a great running gag! The changing room in Malfoy Manor was a very sweet, romantic touch.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on October 27, 2008
    Excellent
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  • From LadyDisdain on October 27, 2008
    Interesting twist., I like the way you write, it reads easily., It is a bit OoC though, but I guess whether this is positive or negative I do not know yet! :) I'd love to read more

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  • From Ithilwen on October 27, 2008
    This is a nice story.. It has soo much potential! I can't wait to read more!
    I'm sure Lucius will make her forget! Right???
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on October 27, 2008
    WOW!! It opened at full speed! Awesome LMAO you are doing great hon, keep it up!!!


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From voraciousreader on October 27, 2008
    Hermione at full throttle, I'm interested to see where this goes. I hope you continue.
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