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Reviews for Truth be told

By : lonlydragonbrde
  • From bloodshound on October 18, 2011
    one idea you could do is read a lot of other fics... not necessarily similar to yours. I get ideas from all over but the ones that have inspired me to want to play with that world were 'rise of the dracons' and 'just submit' of HP's and several Sesshy forcibly mates Kags in Inuyasha. They may do nothing for you as i tend to self insert using my characters and putting them in someone elses world.

    another thing that might help would be thinking back. Did you have somewhere you wanted this to go or was it writing itself.
    About this cross roads, what are the choices? Which do you lean towards, realist, sad, happy ending?
    At any rate. my e mail is ckestra@hotmail.com if you want to bounce ideas off me.
    Probably not the help you were looking for but ah well.

    I'm re reading the story to see if i can get some ideas.
    Well, obviously something dire needs to happen to Ron and Har and Drac still need to find out. Rape is just not condonable under any circumstances. What the hell was going on in Rons head seriously.
    Har and Drac just confessed and then consummated their love... from the sound of it, a lot of their house members aren't going to be supporting. How much of hard time do yyou want to give them? Is Voldi still an issue? there's still the whole 'Har's gay' fall out to deal with too. how is homosexuality seen by the wizarding world?
    Um... not giving you much in the way of answers here... still, in there somewhere there might be a starting point. good luck.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 15, 2011
    Omg,you have to write more! A little disappointing that it took so long to get to the sexy parts,but the story was so good that it made up for it. :D
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  • From ANON - SilverLion on September 21, 2011
    It's actually spelled 'Blaise'. I wonder when Harry will find out about Hermione being raped by Ron? He'll probably toss the little fucker off the nearest tower, if he's lucky.
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  • From ANON - Chris on September 16, 2011
    I guess I have a thing for slytherins, I think it should be Blaise Zambini who should be her secret lover and im thinking Neville Longbottom should rescue her because of course hes another griffindor.
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  • From ANON - djaddict on September 16, 2011
    This is interesting Hoping for more soon.

    Maybe finish the evil cliffhanger and then tell us about Ron and Hermione! lol
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on September 16, 2011
    I like a little divergence, go ahead with the Ron/Hermione bit.
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  • From ANON - Chris on September 15, 2011
    I think you should maybe divert for a chapter or two and let the rest of us in on whats happening to the 2/3 of the golden trio before continueing with the two love birds. But make sure to update soon plz, been waiting for another update. =)
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  • From ANON - draco<3 on September 15, 2011
    please continue it
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  • From TokioAngel on September 14, 2011
    oooh I really like this story!
    I was just waiting for the moment when Draco actually get's to read a passage out of Harry's diary, and then when he did OMG!! LOL
    It was just so hillarious when he wrote about the dream he'd had about Draco. Ohh and it was also soo exciting to read the part when Draco catches Harry reading his journal!! iip, lol^^
    I actually read all 9 chapters in one sitting, hahaha because I needed to find out how what happens^^
    Keep up the good work, I want to read more of this!
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  • From bloodshound on July 08, 2011
    I hope Mio will be alright. Ron is such an utter prick. May something dire happen to him soon.
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  • From bloodshound on June 09, 2011
    please do...wow, reading this i feel like humming a line from a certain song. "I'M JUST A GUY WHHOSE INTENTIONS ARE GOOO/ OH LORD PLS DON'T LET ME BE MISUNDERSTOOD."

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  • From bloodshound on June 08, 2011
    I hope he's got some damn good security for those pages. Last thing he needs when Harry is trusting him is for someone to get a hold of them.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2011
    Just a suggestion, you should add a proper summary. You might get more people interested in it.
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  • From bloodshound on June 05, 2011
    well, thats progress... of a sort.
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  • From bloodshound on June 05, 2011
    ah, teenage angst and anguish... still I hope these two get it togrther cause thry'll be better togrther than apart. ty for reposting this. does the journal have any of Harry's back history, or just feeling, thoughts, emotions?
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