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Reviews for Unknown Chemistry (Complete)

By : dragonsgirl
  • From ANON - gabby1234 on December 01, 2008
    I feel like i can literally see this scene in my head the one with hermione and draco meeting the Auror's it was described really really good! And I like the elaboration on the back story to Ron about him being a fa mily pariah,it's really exploring the characters in a very detailed fashion. I mean Harry would be angry even if it was Ron and the Weasly's standing by hermione put a smile on my face, especially when they were willing to send Ron in after the birthday fisco, not many families are that objective, so I think it's refreshing they are so clear headed and just in this story. Molly Weasly is known for looking after her own and after loosing George you think she'd be even harder on these thing's but I take it she's doing this for Ron's own good,there's so many dimensions to this story that it makes it 100% refreshing, I totally dig this story; and I can't wait to see more!
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  • From Eilisbelle on December 01, 2008
    YAY for protectiveDraco!!! You know you're in love when, you take a few hits from your girl and you *still* ask her if she's doing better!! DG, that must've been a very tough chapter to write, I'm thinking second in only to, the near-rape scene, or was it worse?? I don't know. Still good, and I wasn't sure if you were gonna have Frensen side with Ron. Good chapter all in all, and hon, yes, these kinds of stories *always* keep me hooked!!
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  • From ANON - Adriana on December 01, 2008
    Oh that position is gonna become sacred!!! Lol can't wait to read that scene haha
    Good job with this chapter, I think you really got Hermione's turmoil across...It was very well written =)
    Thanks for the update!

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  • From kazfeist on November 28, 2008
    I'm not sure if I've reviewed before, but I love this story, and how affectionate Draco is towards Hermione. Thanks for keeping Severus alive, too. Keep up the good work. :D
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  • From ANON - Adriana on November 26, 2008
    and oh I nearly forgot the class comedy lol love Draco's seriousness concerning the oldest stone in the building...
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  • From ANON - Adriana on November 26, 2008
    wow this is becoming very serious and dramatic i love it!
    great shower scene too! hehehe
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  • From Eilisbelle on November 26, 2008
    DG, you really know how to pack a punch. That was an incredible chapter!! Morning-shower sex... delish, and with a God like Draco... *yeah* I wouldn't mind that either. I really like how you paint Severus, as well, he seems to be really likeable, which is something I really like. Loved the class scene, too *funny*!! I couldn't stop laughing!! Finally with the bombshell.... well, all I have to say is, I can't *wait* to see how you work that one!! Awesome chapter DG!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 25, 2008
    Oh, poor Hermione. And, poor Draco. He's being such a rock. And, she's about to completely fall apart. I know I said it before, but I love your Snape. The best part of this chapter was that through all the fun and love, I could feel the tension building. Fantastic writing! Thanks again, HG4eva
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  • From ANON - gabby1234 on November 25, 2008
    tricky tricky twisty plot that is really unexpected, I mean not really it's what should happen, I love the fact that Harry and Mr. Weasly did the right thing even though it was Ron! Usually family members and best friends can be not so great about that stuff. I really like the subtle healthy way Draco's rubbing off on Hermione ;and that shower scene was totally awesome an freaking hot!,I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - radness. on November 23, 2008
    omg i'm so in love with this story. i look forward to the updates and i check for one everyday.
    the intensity of the emotions you portray are astounding, and moving, and heartbreaking and heartfelt all at once.

    please update it again soon.

    its wonderfull.
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  • From ANON - Adriana on November 22, 2008
    omg omg omg SEX!
    and ohhh how beautifully written it was!
    and the whole Ron thing ..whoa...so powerfully written
    i'm very in love with this story great job =)
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  • From ANON - gabby1234 on November 22, 2008
    Freaking bravo! You really put some more awesome spice in that sex scene and added that little extra kick to Ron can't wait to see more! Seriously that was awesome!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on November 21, 2008
    What the heck are you apologizing for?! That was perfect. It was touching, sweet, awful, hurtful, action-packed, fast-paced, and lovely. Yes, there was angst, but their love more than made up for it. I want to enter the story to smack Ron around, but other than that it was just right! No apologies, just keep writing. lol Thanks, HG4eva
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  • From blondpierogi on November 21, 2008
    o0o wow... what an awesome chapter.
    fucking Ron, I hate that bastard, ugh if he was real i would hurt him soo bad, and I wouldn't need magic to do that.
    on a great note, they finally professed their feelings for eachother, wow that was awesome!!!
    cannot wait to read more!!!
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  • From Eilisbelle on November 21, 2008
    Very very very AWESOME chapter!!!! DG, right from "you ever even think of her again, I will end you", to "I love you..." fabulous!!
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