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Reviews for Any Random Tuesday

By : starupinthesky
  • From ANON - Wiley on May 29, 2009
    A little less Gwen in this chapter than I like :P However, I know there are other characters in the story who are important, too.

    Harry and Ginny's fight/argument really flashed by. I guess the two of them are pretty emotional people and their moods have been known to change quickly. The sex caught me off guard. It's been awhile since i've read earlier chapters, but I think that's the first time anything so explicit's been written (at least recently). It's not what I read this for, but I suppose it's appropriate for Harry and Ginny.

    I hadn't realized it before, but I think I'm interested in hearing a bit more from Ron, too. He's been fairly quiet so far and he seems like he's got something new to say about all this.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - doodle on May 22, 2009
    This is fantastic. I think the story line is fresh and the addition of new characters well thought out. Thank you for a great read!
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  • From kazfeist on May 21, 2009
    Well, I've gotten to the end of the chapters that are up. I can't wait to see how Harry and Ron will handle Gwen's situation. Great job, so far. :D
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  • From kazfeist on May 21, 2009
    Hello! I remember the first couple chapters of this, and I'm so glad you updated. I had to particularly review this chapter. I love how you've brought Gwen to the Quidditch World Cup. I hope she can find her baby later in life....wonder if it was Goyle Sr. who did the dirty deed for her? You've done a wonderful job in drawing Gwen's character, and I can't wait to see if Tonks comes back in this story, as she died in canon. Keep up the good work! :D
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  • From ANON - Wiley on November 26, 2008
    Nice interactions between LPD and the Aurors. The chief's attitude, though, makes me curious how many other joint cases with the Ministry he's dealt with. It's probably not important to the current story, but it perked my interest.

    Gwen's flashbacks sound like they could exacerbate things! Should be interesting.
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  • From skydancer on November 25, 2008
    very nice.
    But.....You might need to put a disclaimer on Gwen Cooper as being from Torchwood....even if she's pre-torchwood...I dont think that you can brush it off as coincidence of the name.and occupation.....
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  • From ANON - lilprincess on November 24, 2008
    Genial as
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  • From ANON - Wiley on November 23, 2008
    There's enough in his description that I get the feeling Gregory will definitely show back up...if not perhaps already exist in the story (It's been awhile since I've read the books...his description and name sound familiar)?
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  • From bananasforyou on November 23, 2008
    wow, i like
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  • From ANON - lilprincess on November 12, 2008
    This is the first time I review a story here, but I really really liked it. I hope that you update often and that you will let us know were Hermione is.

    En resumen, Me encanto tu historia, pobre Draco.
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  • From ANON - Wiley on November 11, 2008
    The first scene was quite vivid and passionate. The dream twist is pretty funny. While I don't speak for all readers, I found it as jarring to read as if I was brought out of a dream.

    The second scene was some good character work. We continue to see how concerned Draco is while also gaining some understaning of Harry's position in the Ministry.

    I, for one, look forward to the interactions between aurors and muggle police. All wizarding world all the time can get old. It's the most fun when the mundane and magical meet!
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  • From kazfeist on November 04, 2008
    Thanks so much for the third chapter. I guess I misread the first one; I thought Ron had kidnapped her. Looks like a much more complex plot, now. Who knows? Maybe the girl with the flat affect isn't even Hermione. Or, maybe she's pregnant, too. :D
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  • From kazfeist on October 31, 2008
    So, she's been kidnapped, and whoever it was used Ron as bait. Interesting. :D
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  • From ANON - Wiley on October 30, 2008
    The author is terribly clever and seems to have a delightfully mischevious spark. There is a genuine hint of mystery that, I believe, would make the story gripping (at least so far) even outside the HP setting. On the other hand, these are all characters we know and love...which definitely plays up a reader's curiosity about Hermione's whereabouts.

    I certainly look forward to reading more.
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  • From bananasforyou on October 28, 2008
    very good so far!
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