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Reviews for 23 Positions In a One Night Stand

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From emo44 on November 10, 2023

    God, that was fricken hilarious. Lucius, seeing the poolside show, hearing them at his door, the scratch in the door "investigating" his blotter, hearing them. I had tears streaming down my face. Oh and best of all Draco revealing to Lucius it was/is Hermione Granger.  God I wish you wrote more of this story. Hell, I don't even know if you'll see this review. Thank you for sharing your imagination. Bravo!


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  • From emo44 on November 10, 2023

    I loved that song. Totally forgot about it till I read this. Such a fun night for Draco and Hermione. I think I need one. lmao


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  • From Pamelamoores on September 10, 2018

    Jealous!! I want a man like that!!


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  • From ANON - fdavis on September 19, 2014
    This was so sexy and hot to read. Thank you! And don't ever apologize for helping so many people to get off. You're like a missionary worker. lol MORE MORE MOR!
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  • From centava on August 27, 2014
    Fantastically hot story!
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  • From ANON - Centava on August 08, 2014
    Fantastic PWP. Some of the positions were a bit too similar to count as separate ones, but who cares, it was HOT! But I kept wondering if they'd end with one you didn't use--him sitting upright with basically their legs wrapped around each other. Not the easiest position, but that criterion didn't stop some of your others.

    Hot story and I hope to read more of your work!
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  • From LadyHemlock27 on June 21, 2013
    lmao oh this was priceless... I love stories that are hot and serious as well as being funny and hot...
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  • From ANON - Jazupyourlife on August 20, 2012
    Omg soo hot.. I've read this before and i still can't get over the fact that its super hot! Are u making a sequel to this? I'm going to really look forward to it..
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  • From Trelweny on July 31, 2012
    Only three-quarters? O_o

    Brilliant! Absolutely BRILLIANT! Wonderful job on all the positions. Loved Lucius' reaction to everything the next day. I'd love to know Narcissa's thoughts... but I imagine her too cultured to Talk about it. At least not until the youngsters' wedding day. ;) Then I could see her teasing her soon-to-be daughter-in-law.

    Thanks so much for writing!
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  • From ANON - Alice on June 16, 2012
    Lucius's reaction was priceless! I totally imagined it in my head after Draco was done listing all the places he took Hermione XD
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  • From lovingyou4ever17 on April 21, 2012
    Loved your story. I would love to see you continue with your story to see what happens with Draco and Hermione :)
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  • From ANON - lilywilson on February 25, 2012
    i like pure porn though so i dont mind
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  • From ANON - Coos on November 06, 2011
    LMFAO!!! I rather found it educational. I took the phrase too literal without thinking of locations. So I suppose it is possible. Very good by the way I kind of wish there was more of a story plot to it though. Perhaps I'll just look as some of your other work.
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  • From QueenRuby on February 21, 2010
    I know this was supose to be a one shot but I could see it becomeing a very intresting story. If you were to deside to make it longer I would defintly be reading it. and pure porn is good everyonce and a while.
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  • From Monddame on December 19, 2009
    Ah hahaha! I know you wrote this over a year ago, but I just had to comment to tell you that this little fic had me searching for that Prince song, which is AWESOME! Oh Prince...
    Anyway, I'm slowly reading my way through your fics (rather prolific, aren't you?), and I must say that the improvement in your writing (I'm reading from the bottom up, so in chronological order, I suppose) is fantastic. Not that it was bad to begin with -- it wasn't -- but it is much more fluent and effortless now (or 14-ish months ago, haha, your more recent fics are probably even better)! So, yeah...good on ya!

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