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Reviews for The Guardian

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From lizzy1933 on November 01, 2008
    Really a terrific vampire story!! Loved the surprise vampire at the end. That old codger really deserved a stake through his heart! lol

    BTW Voldemort's thingies were horcruxes, not huxcruxes.
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  • From Angie30 on November 01, 2008
    Bravo! I found this story today and once I started to read it I couldn't stop. I loved every twist and turn and look forward to reading more of your works. :)
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on November 01, 2008
    That was pretty good
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  • From wishyouwere on November 01, 2008
    I am an avid reader, so it was very nice to have this story up and complete in a couple of days!
    I think that a companion story would be a great idea - there are so many things that you could do with it, even knowing how the outcome will ultimately be. I always struggle with Dumbledore when he is written as over-medling, and even so convinced that he is absolutely right in everything he does, that he is almost evil. I guess for me, the problem is that when I read the first book, and saw the first movie, I felt so badly for Harry and how he hade been treated by his 'family' that the loving and grandfatherly Dumbledore was such an easy character to like. Finally, Harry had an adult in his life who cared for him, encouraged him and wanted to see him do his best. Don't we all wish that we had someone like that? However, in your story, given what a self-centred little twerp Harry turned into, and can accept the Dumbledore that you have written. The ending felt a little bitter sweet, with Hermione and Severus unchanged, and not aging, while their friends and collegues 'move on' as it were. I wonder, since she would become a pariah if society knew that she was a vampire, would they not have to alter their appearance in some way? And rather soon because if Harry now looks like the grandfather he is, they would not to be able to keep their secret. Or was that why they are disappearing?
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  • From KellyJCR on November 01, 2008
    Great story can't wait to read more from your. Well Done!!!
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  • From ANON - LU on November 01, 2008
    Excellent, really enjoyed that. Will be looking to see if you've posted any other stories, you spin a great tale.

    Lu
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  • From ANON - j on November 01, 2008
    plz dont end the story there... just PLEASE!
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on November 01, 2008
    holy shit, she gave up her life for him. Good story
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  • From KellyJCR on October 31, 2008
    I think I may have more questions than Harry at this point. I do love the twist the story has taken though. I can't wait to see what Tonks has to say she was in love with Remus after all so that should be interesting. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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  • From ANON - Karen on October 31, 2008
    How can William return to his "pack" when he isn't attacked until the attack they are talking about protecting? It makes me a little confused on the timing of the meeting.

    Very interesting story to read, and I look forward to reading the rest. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Myrna on October 31, 2008
    Yahoo!!! This couldn't be better...Vampires! I love Vampires xD And I really love your story; the storyline is kinda inversed and it just makes us craving for more chapters :)
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  • From neelix on October 31, 2008
    Wow!!!

    Vampires.... I totally love this - I am reading almost as quickly as Hermione is feeding, it's just perfect!!! Well done, can't wait for more!
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  • From alm1067 on October 30, 2008
    So Good!!!! This is a great story, just in time for Halloween!!! Thanks and update soon.
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  • From wishyouwere on October 30, 2008
    I found your story today, started reading, and could not wait until the next chapters! So thanks for posting them!
    Your story has some proofing issues...but nothing major...and nothing that I do not do with my own stories!
    What I am really enjoying is the reverse story line, if you will. Starting with Severus and Hermione together, and then slowly letting the reader know how it got to that point. Brilliant! I am also enjoy how this is starting to feel like a quest. No one is giving Harry the answers all at once, although I am sure that any of them could. To be sure that it will sink in for him, Harry is being sent on a quest, receiving little pieces of the bigger puzzle...one at a time. Please, keep posting and I will keep reading!
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  • From TriniMinx on October 30, 2008
    Ooh wow, that was a quick update!
    This is interesting. What the binding between Harry and Hermione? And why is Harry being so mean to her when when obviously everyone around him keeps telling him that its not her fault she had to kill Remus? Coming to that, what did he do? Was it that he tried to attack her because he changed sides?
    Why can't Snape tell Harry, since he knows everything? Is it because he promised her that he wouldn't tell Harry?

    Alright, looking forward to the next one!


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