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Reviews for Silver Opportunities

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  • From alma on November 03, 2008
    Wow, good start.
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  • From sanda on November 03, 2008
    good chapter
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  • From Articwolf8556 on November 03, 2008
    oooooh, tricky tricky, you made us thnk that there was going to be some hot bonding and there was only hotness... not that we are complaining about tbat :). I can't wait till the next chapter.
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  • From neverfallx3 on November 02, 2008
    mmmmm, nice. i love the pace ur going at but if you think u shud slow down do as u wish but please dont stop updating this is too fab. update soon
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  • From Articwolf8556 on November 02, 2008
    This is a great story and what a place to stop... I can't wait to see how they handel Harry. Please continue soon.
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  • From on November 02, 2008
    i love it. i cann't wait until the next chapter to see happens.
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  • From sanda on November 02, 2008
    good story
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  • From LilyBlack on November 02, 2008
    Like your story but a few points

    1) get a beta reader
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  • From Carmeleyes23 on November 02, 2008
    Ahh i just found this story and IT IS AWESOME...Why'd you stop tho :(
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on November 02, 2008
    Noooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! evil cliffy....*grumbles* awesome story!! plz UPDATE as soon as possible.
    oh and if possible i was wondering if u send ppl emails on ur updates. if u do plz Email me at Dbabe16@aol.com or u could just email to chat
    aesome fic oce more ^^ XD
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on November 02, 2008
    omfg chapppy 7 was sooooo sexy!!! awesomeness!!!!
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  • From neverfallx3 on November 02, 2008
    update soon! i love this so much.
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  • From wolfcathope on November 02, 2008
    I like this story but an a little confuced what happened to Fawkes
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  • From Slytherdor on November 02, 2008
    Hi,

    I really Like your Fic and If I upset You in my last review, I apologize.

    It wasn't Meant as Criticism but to help you. You have a very good story line and sometimes spelling mistakes cause people to stop reading. In chapter five you misspelled the word much, you typed mush. Which was a tad confusing
    and takes away a little enjoyment of reading your fic. In the chapter nine, you misspelled Horcrux. That is why you need a beta who will catch the spelling mistakes before you update your story online.

    There are two ways to get a beta, either you need to check the Forum for the Beta list, or someone can offer to help you.

    If you are still having problems finding a beta but the next chapter, email me and I will see if one of my friends can assist you. I would offer my services but I am still waiting to see if one of the fics that I usually beta has been abandoned or not.

    I can't wait to see what happens when the threesome actually bond.

    If you need it, my email address is Slytherdor7@googlemail.com.

    Until the next chapter,
    Happy Writing,
    Slyth
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  • From CherryStarburst on November 02, 2008
    It's actually a pretty good story. I had my reservations at the grammar, spelling etc, but I really do like this. A few things I've noticed - it's Aunt Petunia who's Harry's aunt, and it's a horcrux. If you want to get a beta, try searching Perfect Imagination, a beta reader site where you can find one to help you. And, even without a beta, I'm sure you can proofread your own work. Surely you know some basic rules - Every new sentence starts with a capital letter, and 'I', when speaking about yourself, is always a capital, which I've noticed you've missed quite a few times. Readers will appreciate the effort of checking through your own chapters
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