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Reviews for Refashioning Affection

By : SarahRae
  • From Ithilwen on November 13, 2008
    Oh he's so doomed lol!
    And seems like she's not entirely immune when it comes to him eighter. I mean, who would be???

    I'm sure he will help her out with the not being a crone before finding a man hehe.

    I really did enjoy this chapter and I look forward to the next one!
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  • From Ithilwen on November 12, 2008
    This was a funny chapter..! Thanks for the smiles lol.

    But I see someone is "on his knees" for her! I like it when he does go off character in some fics. Don't restrain yourself if you feel like doing it again hehe.

    And Draco would do much better if he kept his mouth shut LOL.
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  • From chickaboo on November 12, 2008
    That was too funny. Poor Draco. Poor Draco's head. lol I can't wait for more!
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 11, 2008
    Chapter 5: I
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  • From chyara on November 11, 2008
    cute so far... one problem.
    "Severus and Draco looked over at Lucius who was still watching her walk away, his eyes roaming her person.

    "Lucius, you are doomed,
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  • From bluezauza on November 11, 2008
    I'm loving it! It's ooc but i don't really care about it, i love Lucius and Severus and if they are well written cannon is not important! It's a fun story and she is going to give him a hard time isn't she?


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  • From Shaitan on November 11, 2008
    Terrific, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Toto on November 11, 2008
    Enjoying the story, but Draco should be whining about the possibility of HALF-siblings, not STEP-siblings.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 11, 2008
    OOC or not, I laughed at the mental image of both snape and Lucius whacking Draco upside the head in public! I really like this, it's light enough to have some fun with.
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 10, 2008
    Hi Sarah -

    As you know, I've been reading your story and I think you write very well. If you are interested in having someone else polish the small stuff in your prose I can recommend a certified beta who would be willing to tweak your work for free. She would not be re-writing anything, merely adjusting spelling and a few commas. Then you can write and she can fix the details. Your story doesn't need anything done but a few typos. If you are interested, her email is sweettiff_14@hotmail.com.

    Just a suggestion from a fellow writer. Cheers!

    LaBibliographe@yahoo.com



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  • From chickaboo on November 09, 2008
    So good. It seems that Lucius is going to have his work cut out for him if Hermione is a firm believer in not dating a coworker. I can't wait! lol
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 09, 2008

    Chapter 4: I never worked well at a desk either. I like to spread out with papers on a sofa so Hermione
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  • From Ithilwen on November 09, 2008
    And so it begins indeed!

    He's def abit more than smitten with her! And she's having somethoughts too!

    Can't wait for more!!
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  • From voraciousreader on November 09, 2008
    Lucius can take me home and ravish me any time he wants, LOL. Poor guy, if Hermione refeuses to change that rule about not dating co-workers, he's in for rough time of it!
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 09, 2008
    Chapter 3: This chapter gives a good picture of Hermione
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