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Reviews for Refashioning Affection

By : SarahRae
  • From chickaboo on November 08, 2008
    Great update. It gave me a bit of chuckle how Hermione couldn't be closer to the truth about Lucius. lol I can't wait for more!
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  • From MistressV on November 07, 2008
    I'm relatively new to this ship, but even so you're idea seems very original! I love that Ron isn't a jerk and didn't hurt her or anything. I can't wait for more!
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  • From voraciousreader on November 07, 2008
    I just can't picture Lucius wrapped in a Navajo blanket, LOL, but I'd love to try! This is good and I like the way you've set the scene. And yes, some of us were also up quite late waiting for the final results. Hopefully, we got it right this time, damn it.
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 06, 2008
    Chapter 2: Hermione has Harry back in her life now that she's in London. That's a good thing for both of them, working in the Ministry. It appears that Lucius has a bit of a thing for Miss Hermione. And Hermione seems not entirely immune to the tall, elegant wizard either. (Well, who would be?)

    It's good that Narcissa and Lucius are divorced. It's always sad when authors kill her off. That has to affect Draco and muddies the plot, making the author have to deal with that (although very often they don't). It sounds like Draco knows his father has a yen for Hermione and isn't too concerned about it. That's quite adult of him.

    So begins Lucius' pursuit of sweet, innocent Hermione. What a lucky young woman.

    ___________________
    I'll kick in with a few corrections, then...
    "to notice the tall, blacked haired " - black-haired
    "The are copies of all you reports" - THEY are copies of all YOUR...
    "mess.
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  • From chickaboo on November 05, 2008
    Love it! I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts when Lucius inevitably starts coming round. lol
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  • From lostmagicks on November 05, 2008
    Another excellent chapter, I await the next chapter with baited breath. I loved the 'great ferret father' a wonderfully funny phrase.
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  • From Citten on November 05, 2008
    Well i love the story! :) you are doing a marlvious job! i am going to look forward to reading the chapter of this story! i am hoping that you have lots planned for this story for i love long stroies so dont rush anything! :) i will be watching for the next chapter!
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  • From Ithilwen on November 05, 2008
    Nice chapter.

    This has a very nice flow in it, not to rushed and not to slow eighter. It's just right I think.

    If she only knew what lay ahead of her now, already has a secret admirer and he's going to persue her. I think she will be pleasantly surprised since it seems she's not carrying any grudges or?

    Please write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on November 05, 2008
    Nice piece of work! I'm curious to where this is going to! :) Update regularly!
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  • From Lauriurix on November 04, 2008
    nice! :D update soon!
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  • From CoCoM on November 03, 2008
    Good beginning. I am always excited by new HG/LM fics so looking forward to seeing what you will come up with for next chapter.
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 03, 2008
    Chapter 1: My favorite
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  • From Ithilwen on November 03, 2008
    This is a really good start!
    I could so feel with her when she ran into Lucius.. Having done so on several occasions with men I'd rather not slam into like that LOL.

    I can't wait for more. I have a very good feeling about this story. Please write more soon!
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  • From lostmagicks on November 03, 2008
    I really enjoyed this first chapter and eagerly await more. I really like the idea of Hermione loathing having to work at a desk!

    On another note, I too use mac but I found that firefox is easier to use than safari and tends to cause less problems, you can download it for free.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 03, 2008
    I like it so far. Poor Hermione, first day a a Dept. Head and falls all over Lucius. We should all be so lucky!
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