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Reviews for Atonement

By : emilywaters
  • From ANON - ryan on December 08, 2008
    no offense but i am somewhat creeped out by your story. only ask u that u show more of Draco being a lil bit more of a man and not a complete coward. Show at least some part wher he helped out in the war or something and doesnt remember it or something along those lines. This is just a recommendation and it is completely your wish to follow it or not. However I would strongly recommend u do so because u have an amazing style of writing and posses a lot of potential to improve the plot. Again this is just one person and if i have offended u then i am extremely sorry :D.


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  • From callistianstar on December 08, 2008
    I hadn't realized that you posted these latest [three] chapters. So much of this story feels so surreal. To see someone as proud as Draco acting like that, it is strange and interesting. I'm quite hooked onto this story and where you continue to take it. It was surprising to notice how long it took until she touched him, even her first blow being administered through paper. His continued degradation and his lack of understanding of the why he was doing this is absolutely enthralling. I'm also curious if any of the children have a role in this story. Wonderful job so far.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 07, 2008
    Heavy chapter...Draco is almost broken it seems, but not quite. This has moved beyond absolution I think... Is Draco falling for her...like really falling? And how will that work itself out for him? The scene where he's begging and can't seem to find words under her demand felt so real and raw to me. And the beating was brutal, but it seemed cathartic for him. His need to bear anything for her really is profound. But, I had to LOL@ Hermione's cracks about his dubious charms and penis. Boy she's cold lol. But then again, so was he, and that's the original point of their agreement, isn't it? I love the way he's openly adoring her regarding her as magnificent and glorious... and how comfortable he is kissing her feet. And she allowed him to stay overnight. Yay, she's not completely heartless, in fact, I think she's developing some feelings for him. I caught that bit about her running her hands through his hair...there's a degree of power in submission, I wonder if she's trying to guard herself from enjoying him too much. I can't wait to see what happens when he comes back and they resume. Love the realism and edge of it all...once again, great job Emily, thanks and update soon!!! :)))
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  • From Sumhope on November 27, 2008
    I LOVE it! this story is soooo intense. I like that it follows all the books and im also enjoying a humble malfoy. Please give me more! :D
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  • From ANON - Toni on November 23, 2008
    Very nice. I love BDSM but I'm much more in consensual stuff like this than into some of the other stories you wrote, even if I can't remember one that isn't good.

    Heels are a sign of power? Odd, I never realized that. I guess I finally understand why some totally stupid, stuck up women in my company insist on wearing high heels, even if they don't look any better in them, on the contrary. A matter of opinion, isn't it. They don't even realize they have become a joke.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2008
    I feel bad for Draco. I can't help that I do... From where this is going I shouldn't hope for a decent happy ending between the two; should I ??? Other than that your story is good and very intense !!!
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on November 22, 2008
    sick, depraved, interesting, eyebrow raising shit, this fic keeps getting better and better.
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  • From bananasforyou on November 22, 2008
    hehehehe. yes, she touched you.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 22, 2008
    The fact that Hermione has allowed him into her home says volumes to me. She's revealing nothing in words, but she's letting him in nonetheless and wow@Ron and Hermione's open marriage, that's certainly interesting. I love how much it caught Draco off guard as well, and how he's learning about her through observation and just how much he really doesn't know about her. I loved Ron's response to the situation and warning to Draco. Heh. How humiliating! What a total mind f*ck this whole situation is for him, but he likes it more than he's letting on. I wonder if Ron is seeing someone on the side as well, well, it wouldn't be on the side, would it? I love the idea of Draco cleaning the Muggle way. Interesting conversation between the two...I loved his response to her asking for his wand. There's a bit of the old Draco in there yet...and the way she shut him down after he carelessly gave his approval was funny...Hermione's treatment is cold, then lukewarm and then cold again, but she is warming up a bit. The fact that the one thing that stayed with him after he left was her backhanding him is just awesome in its implications in terms of Draco's submission and feelings about their 'relationship'. I LOVE this Emily...thank you again.
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on November 14, 2008
    Well, I just found this story...I somehow missed the posting of the first two chapters and i must say...

    I want to read more!!! There is an underlying feeling of tension in this story...not just sexual, but in their behavior towards one another. I can't wait to see where this story leads!!

    Well Done!!!

    Lady B*
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  • From Cathartesaura on November 14, 2008
    I'm so glad she's not warming up! AFF is an old-fashioned place in terms of gender roles, good job having the woman be admirable and powerful and, lets face it, kind of a dick - while the guy is subservient. Awesome.
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  • From scarletwitchextreme on November 14, 2008
    this shit had me speechless, interesting, fucking interesting, I would have never thought up something so twisted, essential, depraved, invigorating, so freeing, and I get the feeling u haven't even begun to tap into those adjectives yet. It has me on edge, u have update soon, keep up the great work. MORE!!!!!
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  • From PotterEntourage on November 14, 2008
    Oh,I see steps, baby steps but steps nonetheless, in the right? direction! Did she hit him with a rolled up piece of parchment like a dog???? If yes, i'm ROFL! and the very high heel near his parts, priceless! I adore how hes making his own rituals because she won't/doesn't. Genius all around!
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  • From StarKneazle on November 14, 2008
    Uh . . this is amazing. I'm just gonna let you know that. You have to continue writing this. It's kinda like crack. It makes me want you to write a story for me. Yeah. I think you should. Anything you want.

    Amazing
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  • From bananasforyou on November 14, 2008
    damn you!!!
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