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Reviews for Child of New Beginnings

By : triz
  • From AndromedaTonks1602 on December 23, 2008
    Oh my god!! You left me dying to know what is going to happen. Please write again soon. I love this story.
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  • From LilCas on December 23, 2008
    No No NO NO NO NO NO No No don't kill him please don't do it please i beg of you don't do it!!!!!
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  • From slygriff21 on December 22, 2008
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

    How could you just leave it like that! OOOOHHHHH! I can't wait to find out what happenss next! Please update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 22, 2008
    umm can i ask, is there a chapter missing. i just feel lke i have missed something

    Foofie
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  • From AndromedaTonks1602 on December 21, 2008
    I am really loving this story. I hope that another chapter comes soon. I am in suspence
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 21, 2008
    wow i have never heard breastfeeding put so beatifully. i know when i see it i'm like ew look away! look away!!!!! haha i'm only 19 so i don't think my reaction is too out there. =P
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 21, 2008
    i'm immensely enjoying the story but the end of this chapter really irked me. 2 things: severus did two things that lucius did pretty much to a T: saying he hated seeing woman being vulnerable/crying then promising to protect sebastian... sebastian and her hermione. just like that. i think you have lucius' and severus' personalities blending together too much. ever if they both would act like that in your fic i think some definite phrase changes need to be made because if they were real people i would be so freaked out with how much alike they think.

    lastly, i found it a little amusing that both sebastian and hermione cry in someone else's arms then fall asleep in their arms and have to be put to bed. HAHA so he gets his nose and ability to cry himself to sleep from his mother. =D
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  • From luv2cusmile on December 20, 2008
    holy crap that was the best twist/ cliff hanger i've read in forever. i'm honestly not much of a hermione/snape shipper but dang i gotta read this now!!
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  • From amd2175 on December 20, 2008
    Keep on writing! I am really enjoying this story...as well as the little Slytherin acts Sebastian does!
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  • From LilCas on December 20, 2008
    omg omg omg omg soooooooooooo goood please keep writing i can't wait and see what happenes next!
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 19, 2008
    You may want to post what chapters you updated in your summary if you can. I've noticed you update several chapters at a time, and it's hard for some people to remeber what chapter they were on.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 19, 2008
    excellent
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  • From slygriff21 on December 19, 2008
    This is a great story so far and I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon!

    Tiffany
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on December 18, 2008
    Hi there. I don't know how I missed so many updates! I read up to 10 just the other day and boy did I get a pleasant surprise tonight! Thank you. I like that you have her so understanding and him so contrite. I look forward to them getting past their individual issues and starting to face what happened. I really do enjoy this story. Thank you!
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 17, 2008
    Excellent
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