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Reviews for Child of New Beginnings

By : triz
  • From on December 17, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You can't leave it there!! You just can't!!!
    *whimpers* It's just that good.
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  • From neelix on December 17, 2008
    He's going to find it very hard to overcome this one. Poor Severus...poor Hermione.
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  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 17, 2008
    Excellent.
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  • From marcia on December 17, 2008
    Okay so Hogworts and not St. Mungos. Ah well at least now it'll get a bit more interesting with Sev knowing and the bad guys knowing about Bastion as well.
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  • From DarkTopaz on December 16, 2008
    I love it can't wait for more
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  • From neelix on December 16, 2008
    Awesome... but over far too soon!!!

    Can't wait to see what he says to Hermione.....
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  • From chelleybelle on December 16, 2008
    that was a horrible tease!!! way too short! great story by the way.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 15, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From rox4787 on December 15, 2008
    update update update update update update update please please please please please please please please please please update soon love it cant wait to read more please please update soon
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  • From neelix on December 15, 2008
    Ok, nine chapters in...it's time Severus knew the truth!
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  • From marcia on December 15, 2008
    Not sure I like the bit about how Bella knew of Sebastian. I think it should have been a bit more complected. Other than that not bad, I look forward to more updates. I assume Lucious' instinct is to take her to St. Mungos which would cause quite the uproar when people notice him there with his 'other woman'. Interesting choice of Death Eaters you rarely see Regulus and Karkaroff as escapees.
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  • From CarlaRush on December 14, 2008
    Oh wow, an excellent story. I love the premise and how you have things going along. I'll be keeping an eye out on this.
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  • From ApollinaV on November 10, 2008
    Chapter 1 - I haven't read past the first chapter, but I wanted to stop and give a little feedback. I'd get with someone who's inclined to poetry. Your prophecy doesn't have to rhyme, the HP one didn't, but the HP prophecy was at least cryptic. I'd find a way of rewording your prophecy in keeping with the HP style. It's not vague at all. Also the line about Lucius had memorized the names of every Slytherin and Gryffindor graduate since 1950 seems a bit farfetched. If there's supposed to be 1,000 students at Hogwarts and 50% of them are in those 2 houses, then 5 decades worth of students would be a few thousand names. Just food for thought.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on November 09, 2008
    Ah... This is intriguing me. Poor Narcissa to think that Lucius is cheating at her! Will Draco go and confront "The Woman"? I am so curious! Well done, please continue!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 09, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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