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Reviews for Child of New Beginnings

By : triz
  • From Marti on November 08, 2008
    It's okay. Not spectacular, but an enjoyable read. You have a huge amount of grammatical errors; might I suggest getting a beta?

    Also it's obvious that no Snape has been placed anywhere in Hogwarts four houses since Snape is a muggle name. I know this is A/U (really, all fanfic is A/U!) but I just thought I'd point that out.

    Great effort, please consider getting a beta, though.

    Mar
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  • From TriniMinx on November 08, 2008
    Oooooooooh, story is looking good.
    I reviewed on FF.net before, I see you updated a lot of of it here too!
    Can't wait to see how it plays out, update soon :o)
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  • From KellyJCR on November 08, 2008
    I am loving this story. I can'wait for everything to come out in the open. Thanks for the daily updates! I hate it when updates are few and far between. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 08, 2008
    ohh this just gets better and better. I'll be waiting.
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  • From neelix on November 08, 2008
    arrghhh.... brilliant chapter, but Severus...Baby... his... Hermione... Kissing.....

    Impatient this end!
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 08, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From crssmnc on November 07, 2008
    I want more more more. You have got me hooked, caught like a fish. This story is sooooo good. I wonder is Sebastian ill? Something must really be wrong for Hermione to call. It seems things are moving faster now, at least I hope so.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 07, 2008
    ohhh, I can't wait to see what or how his wife is going to find out. I bet that will be some fun.
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  • From angelnomiko on November 07, 2008
    wow that was awsome .. and what is up with mione .. and will lucius tell narcissa if she ask... please please update soon .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2008
    like i said, i really like this story,,cant wait for more. please post lots more soon, and please make the chapters longer...
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  • From catysmom1028 on November 06, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From crssmnc on November 06, 2008
    Loving it, I can't get enough. I can just picture Lucius letting something slip to either Narcissa or to Draco and they in turn slip up to Severus. I am anxiously awaiting the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 06, 2008
    this is so awesome..i love this side of Lucius,,poor Severus and Hermione..i love babies..and a Snape Baby is even better...so when does Draco get to be Uncle Draco..hehehe..that would be funny..
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  • From neelix on November 06, 2008
    ooh...I like this!! I can't wait for Severus to find out though - hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the reveal!
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  • From ismene5 on November 06, 2008
    When will Severus learn the truth?
    I loke this story. It took me in.
    Please update soon.
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