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Reviews for Child of New Beginnings

By : triz
  • From angelnomiko on November 05, 2008
    aww lucius is soo sweet ..please please update soon ..later for now

    angel
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  • From Lauriurix on November 05, 2008
    awwwwwww lucius is sooo nice :)


    love it!
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  • From Lauriurix on November 05, 2008
    OMG :O plz continue!
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  • From skydancer on November 05, 2008
    nice start! I can see Lucius as a 'good guy' ( emotional sigh,,,,,)
    anyhoo...all i want to nitpic is Revel not Rebel....

    **tosses some carrots to the plot bunnies!***
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  • From KellyJCR on November 05, 2008
    You just had to leave it there didn't you! Your story just got more interesting. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on November 05, 2008
    Nice start,,,,Lucius as MOM makes me shudder a bit. SO here is my question....If he raped her at the revel, how do you plan to get them together? Forgiving your rapist and loving them isn't something that happens....so I am curious to see how you resolve this. I will waiting and reading!


    Happy Writing!!
    S_G
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  • From Zigflorian on November 05, 2008
    oh no! more?
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  • From Zigflorian on November 05, 2008
    very good start!
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  • From KellyJCR on November 05, 2008
    This story has great possibilities. Ilove the plot thus far and I hope you are a author that updates frequently. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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  • From anncee on November 05, 2008
    oohhhh sh-----t! bum bum buuummm

    very intriguing! can't wait to see where this goes!
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  • From ismene5 on November 05, 2008
    I want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From hermioneandseverusfan82 on November 05, 2008
    you should put secerts on here to
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  • From crssmnc on November 05, 2008
    sounds interesting so far I would love to read more
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  • From Lauriurix on November 04, 2008
    woah nice :) i wanna read more :)
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