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Reviews for A Strange Visitor

By : rachelmary
  • From Makovaso on March 25, 2009
    good story
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  • From mls1971 on November 08, 2008
    love this story!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read more of it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Winters Prologue on November 06, 2008
    The story seems a little rushed like you are desperate to finish it. Perhaps slow things down a little, show Harry's reaction. After being under Dumbledore's thumb and being raised to hate Voldemort would be really trust them so easily? If he got a letter from an anonymous person would he really write back straight away? Would be react so welcomingly to the idea that his parents aren't really his parents? harry seems like a 2D character in this story, theres no emotion to him at all.

    never the less I am interested to see where you're going with this. Please email me when you update. gypsy_willow90@hotmail.com
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  • From DefiantThrallXxX on November 06, 2008
    I think your story has an absolutely DELICIOUS premise.
    That being said, I think you need a beta.
    I am more than willing to offer my services. =^_^=
    If you'd like, drop me a line at ShyGirlAtTimes@aim.com
    Slash is love!
    XxX
    The Defiant One =]=]
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