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Reviews for Knickers

By : nastygrl
  • From Wildcatcdc on December 05, 2008
    Well, I have to say, I never thought Neville had it in him! Go Neville! LOL! I shouldn't be surprised though, with his talents with herbology, it's natural that he'd be enraptured by the flora - and the fauna too! But yes, working like that over the years will do wonders for a body. And I love the tattoo. I'm looking at that boy in a whole new light.

    I have to tell you, I finally am all caught up on this and it is fantastic. I had only read a couple of them, but all together like this, it's really wonderful. I love it! And Molly! I am not surprised she's a wild woman - seven kids kind of proves what she's capable of. I love the idea of Arthur drinking the Polyjuice. LMAO @ that!
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  • From PotterEntourage on December 05, 2008
    Neville frickin rocks! Love the details of the Devil Snare tattoo, and his stamina! *Swoooooon* Brava once again, ma, Brava!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 04, 2008
    NICE!!! Neville and his ten inch cock needs another chapter. Those lucky twins...awesome!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 26, 2008
    Oh Molly!! Who knew? LOL> I got a kick out of this one. I think it's great to think of a liberated and experimental Molly with a girl crush. These knicker stories are really cool. I wonder if Molly ever gets to see her crush again, and I cannot believe Arthur would polyjuice himself and wear those for her...you have to do one from his perspective! lol Great chapter :)
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on November 26, 2008
    You have a very interesting mind, girl.

    Nice job and never did I ever imagine reading about Molly's undies.

    You should write about Charlie's undies, or lack thereof as the case may be...:)

    I did get confused near the beginning when Molly starts her story with "wizard's as a rule don't wear knickers". I thought you were just talking about boys for a minute and it kinda lost me. Just a heads up.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2008
    I don't know if I'm feeling hormonal or something but this made me cry at the end!! It was beautiful. You really captured Snape so well, in his most intimate and vulnerable moments. I LOVE this so much. Your writing continues to move me, and I love the way you position and use words, there's a loose poetry here that is so rare in fanfic. I really love how you brought Hermione and him together and the way you depict their relationship. I'm so happy for both of them. lol. The last few lines really just made me go all soft. Awesome job. I hope you keep this one going!
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on November 15, 2008
    Dari! This was incredible. It was like a character study of Severus, but from the point of his undies. How awesome! You rocked it girl, and it was a very good chapter! I'm glad Hermione saved them.
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on November 15, 2008
    Grrrrrl! This was incredible! Chapter 1 was hot, and steamy, and.....hot! (That's right folks, i actually have a college degree!) And Chapter 2 was sad, and sweet, and scary, yet full of hope! All of that in a story about underwear! Bra-frickin'-vo!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 06, 2008
    I LOVE this..it's an interesting perspective and delightfully nasty!! Again, great writing, I can't wait to hear the next bit and whose perspective it will be from : )
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  • From ANON - sweettiff_14 on November 06, 2008
    Oh like like the little changes you made. It flows much better now! Way to go!

    Somehow, you managed to make it even kinkier...nice job!

    Can't wait to see what you've got planned next.
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  • From bananasforyou on November 05, 2008
    just, wow!
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