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By : InLoveWithLove
  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter fifteen

    I love how Draco has Hermione's back. It is great how he is there to reassure her that she is alright, and not infected.

    Later, he was so sweet to basically tell her that she's done great that day and needs to rest and have the others do some of the work.

    Damn, they may have very well been about to kiss if it weren't for the posse of loved ones walking into the kitchen.

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    Well done--keep up the good work!

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    F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter fourteen

    Good filler chapter before the "'f'-it hits the 'sh'-an". LOL

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    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter thirteen

    HURRAY! They all made it out safely at the Weasley rescue mission.

    I love how, dare I say, frantic Hermione was when she was unable to find Draco right away upon arriving back at the Malfoy vacation home.

    Draco was a sweetheart to give Hermione comfort and reassurance when she was become overwhelmed with pain and sorrow due to the loss of her parents.

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    Next up: Rescue Operation "go and get Harry, Pansy and Parvarti. And anyone else who didn
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter twelve

    Oooh! Very exciting!

    Bummer about Percy and Penelope having been infected. Thank the gods that Mr. and Mrs. Weasley are healthy, and hopefully soon to be safe.

    Well done--keep up the good work!

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    F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

    'They were reluctant to go with out ["with out" should be "without"] her but she begged them to run.'
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter eleven

    I like how Draco is more confident after Hermione praises him for his flying skills. Anticipation factor is mounting due to the upcoming rescue missions, and potential confrontations with the Infected.

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter ten

    WEEE! OMG--this story is getting exciting, and I find myself saying, 'come on, come one, get your friends, but be careful for everyones' sake!' LOL
    :p

    Well done--keep up the good work!

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    F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

    1) 'There
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter nine

    Aww, it was so sweet that upon arrival Draco didn't want to let go of Hermione.
    ;~D

    I love how Hermione's mind works of wanting to gather their loved ones from the other camps to keep them safe.

    Great story!

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter eight

    Oh my... very exciting... I wasn't aware that I was holding my breath out of fear for their safety until I reached the end of the chapter.
    ;)

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter seven

    Luna and the rest are smart cookies to have come up with the climbing of the trees. It saved their energy, and their lives. Hopefully Hermione's idea will work for them.

    To hear that the Magical infected are resistant to magic is freaking scarier than six kinds of sin. I'm surprised that they haven't thought to use cutting hexes or reductos to blast them to Hades... granted they have to be careful of the blood, but you know?

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter six

    EEK! Oh shite! RUN!

    OMG--very exciting--very well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter five

    I'm glad that Hermione and Draco had the talk over tea. They cleared the air, got over past grudges, and started the process of becoming friends or more.
    :D

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    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter four

    WOW--I like how organized, and well thought out the Ministry officials are during the debriefing at the sanctuary.

    Draco and Luna are so sweet to try to comfort Hermione due to her depression/despair.

    Well done--keep up the good work!

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    F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

    1) 'The ["The" should be "They"] will have joined us by dawn.'

    2) 'Bunks will be set up all over the homestead and at the moment, it ["it" I believe ought to be "it's"] about seven to eight people to a room.'
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter three

    I'm glad that Hermione talked Draco into hanging around (to await the potential arrival of friends), otherwise he wouldn't have the knowledge of his mother's safety (or rather, it could have been delayed).

    I'm glad that they are still sticking together and not dropping contact because they are no longer at the Ministry.

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter two

    Bummer about Hermione's parents; at least some of her friends made it to the Ministry alive.

    It is good to see that Draco is one of the good guys in that he is trusted enough to have one of the D.A. galleons.

    Well done--keep up the good work--chapter three, here I come!
    :D
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 24, 2009
    RE: chapter one

    OMG, OMG, OMG--I've forgotten how chilling, scary, horrific this first chapter was.

    Very well written--keep up the good work!

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    F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

    1) 'One infected stepped out onto the road and looked like a dear ["dear" should be "deer"] caught in their head lights ["head lights" should be "headlights"].

    2) 'At least one hundred infected stood blocking to ["to" should be "the"] road.

    3) 'They seemed to be just standing [You ought to insert a comma (,) here.] but then they looked at the car.'
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