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By : InLoveWithLove

From ANON - Katlin Malfoy on November 01, 2012
omg if this is not the best combo store i have ever herd so far i love it i cant wait for the next chapter
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From chickaboo on November 23, 2009
This is awesome! I'm loving it. I can't wait for more!!!
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-eight

I love how Hermione had sexy thoughts of Draco having been in the shower due to his still having wet hair--naughty girl!
;D

Mmm, I love how when she came back into the bedroom, from her shower...
'She barely got to look for Draco before she felt his body pressed against her back. He pulled her hair away from her shoulder and bent his head down to kiss her neck lightly. He then licked and sucked on her earlobe.'
YUMMY, very sexy indeed--lucky girl!
;~D

Mmm, a very lucky girl indeed to have such a young buck at her beck and call that has the looks, the moves, and the right lines too...
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-seven

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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-six

Damn Ginny and her ill timed message for Hermione.
'ARGH! Can't you see I'm trying to get myself some here!'
LOL
At least both Hermione and Draco were equally turned on by their snog session.
;~D

I love how right after Ginny left Hermione went right back at Draco, even going so far as to feel him up... only to have Harry bleeding Potter interrupt them next. ARGH!
I love this bit.
'Hermione was so turned on that she could barely think straight ...';
not to mention that Draco was so turned on that he was sporting an erection so hard he could singlehandedly knock down a forest, and was also having difficulties speaking '... his voice still deep and a bit forced'.
;~D

I love how Hermione asked Draco if they would be continuing their "conversation" later, whereupon (one word or two?) his reply was, '
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-five

I'm glad that it was Draco that came across Hermione and that she talked with him about deserving to receive love and attention--a very tender and necessary moment (to be able to find and accept the love that is in front of your face and handed to you on a silver platter).

WOAH--I love how passionate of a kiss they (Hermione and Draco) shared in the library, and then Hermione bringing his face down to hers for more--VERY yummy and sexy!

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Well done--keep up the good work!
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-four

Hmm, with the survivors putting a disillusionment charm on themselves prior to going onto the rooftop during the daytime, I hope that they are clever enough to cover ALL windows with dark substances to prevent light leakage and be a possible draw for whatever... you know?

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Mmm-mmm-mmm, lucky girl to have had such a kind, loving, and gentle boy/man as Viktor show her the ropes on relations between the sexes. It is really too bad that they drifted apart over the years.

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Aww, it was so sweet of Narcissa to sing praises of her son, Draco, and basically give him to Hermione to protect and love. I wish that there were more moms out there with studly sons looking to hand them out as parting gifts to us lonely housewives needing a good (as yet unbroken) boy toy.
LOL
Just kidding!
*::tears in eyes::*
It really was sweet of Narcissa to look out for the well-being and future happiness of her baby boy, Draco. Hermione was a sweetheart to hug Narcissa and reassure her that Draco would never be alone, almost implying that she'll always be there for him.

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

'He was holding a baby and was looking [You forgot to insert the word "at".] up the stars.'
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-three

I'm glad that Luna, Ginny, and Mrs. Weasley all took themselves out of the running for going on supply raids. It makes it safer for everybody that they aren't tagging along just to stay near their menfolk and then risk the lives of many.

They have some good eggs there in Charlie and George to be on the rooftops as lookouts for any infected, along with the two volunteers to assist.

This story is shaping up very nicely.
:D

I hope that it has not been abandoned. I'm only mentioning it because I noticed that it has been updated since December 16, 2008.

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

'She was a [The word "a" is not necessary.] good at it and it made her proud that she was like her Dad.'
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-two

OMG--how freaking cool that Hermione's dad was in the Special Forces, former MI6. A total bummer more so now seeing as they could have used his skills and knowledge. It was a bit of a shock to have learned that Hermione's mum didn't know about it until Hermione figured it all out. It's good to know that there are men out there that can keep their lips tightly shut... huh? LOL
:p

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Great story so far--well done--keep up the good work!
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty-one

I like how Hermione thinks past the end of her nose and is planning for the future and continued health and welfare of those with her.

It is fantastic how Hermione's five friends are standing with/behind her as support in the organizing and leading of the survivors, rather than her taking on too much and cracking/burning out from it all. Lucky girl to have such loving and supportive friends.

*::tears in eyes::*
Oh man, that poor woman loss track of her children? No wonder she is desparate to find her babies.
:(

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter twenty

This really is a great story! You should post it over at "Granger Enchanted", if you haven't already that is.
:D

Mmm, I envy Hermione for having woken up in Draco's arms--lucky girl.

I'm glad that her friends were mature/helpful enough to have made breakfast, rather than wait for her to continue to play mother hen to the lot of them.

Luna is a dear sweet girl to understand why it is that Hermione isn't really very hungry, due to her still grieving for the loss of her parents, as Luna is for losing her dad. Ron is so sweet and caring for Luna to jump to her side and carry her out of the room to cry in privacy.

Dear, sweet Draco... to have his appetite be affected somewhat by Hermione's being off indicates that he is feeling either sympathy for her feelings, or cares for her on a more personal level, or both.

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) '... some one ["some one" should be "someone"] was in bed with her.'
2) '
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter nineteen

I'm glad that Pansy and Blaise are hooked up.

Draco was so sweetly comforting, and dare I say romantic, to wake Hermione, and then sooth her, after her nightmare, and afterwards sleeping next to her to help her get some rest due to his presence next to her. I'm glad that he did it on his own, and that she didn't need to ask/beg him to stay by her side.

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'Knowing that their ["their" should be "there"] was at least peace and love in the room, ...'
2) 'A blinding light was pouring from some where ["some where" should be "somewhere"].'
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter eighteen

OMG, Hermione is such a lucky girl to have a sexy, stud-muffin such as Draco being so supportive, huggy, kissing the top of the head, stroking the side of her face, massages of the shoulders and such, having her lean into/against his strongly sexy and naked torso (well not so naked in that he is only wearing a towel, 'Quite low on his hips too.'), sexy voice, and sultry glances. Damn, I'd buy that for a dollar and eat it up with a spoon!
;~D

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--errors found needing correction:

1) 'But all she could see was her mums ["mums" should be "mum's"] face as she reached for her dad.'
2) '... but she didn
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter seventeen

*::tears in eyes::*
Aww, that was so sweet of Narcissa to offer herself to Hermione as someone to talk to with a shoulder to cry upon.

It is hard to imagine all of this crap happening within a 24 hour period... hey?

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Well done--keep up the good work!

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F.Y.I.--error found needing correction:

'Everyone seemed to be doing them ["them" should be "the"] same as her, ...'
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From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 25, 2009
RE: chapter sixteen

It is good to know how much Lucius loved his family to have warded the place so well to keep them safe, especially when he decided to betray the Dark Lord.

*SQUEE*
I love how Hermione and Draco will be shacking up together in his room... with Blaise and Pansy, but they'll still be together.
;~D

Now then what is the deal with the uncomfortableness between Draco and Pansy?

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Well done--keep up the good work!
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