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Reviews for Severus\'s Trip

By : ronsmistress
  • From Persy on August 24, 2021

    A beautiful love story.


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  • From Midnight_Fairy on February 21, 2015
    I really liked this story! So I hope you keep writing and maybe write stories for fanfiction.net and Ashwinder websites.
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  • From ANON - Alyssa on March 23, 2013
    Excellent!! Loved it from beginning to end!!
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  • From purefaith91 on February 04, 2011
    Your Severus and Hermione were great. Never liked Ron with Hermione for all of the reasons mentioned in your story. While I would not have liked it if Hermione ended up with Ron, it still brought a tear to my eye. I guess it is just sad knowing that when you leave a badwas part of your past behind, you leave the good parts too. Your story was very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. p
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  • From Sampdoria on June 12, 2010
    A absolutely fantastic story, I am so happy I found it!!!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 30, 2010
    I am very glad you went back and edited this so that I got a chance to see it. This was fun, endearing, and loving. I am really glad I chanced upon it. Thank you! HG4eva
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  • From voraciousreader on April 29, 2010
    You did a nice job, it was very smooth. I admit I've read it several times in the original form but hadn't really reviewed (bad me)I can hardly tell where you made alterations, frankly. Still a damn good story.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 23, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From dreamer24 on November 20, 2008
    Whew! *Gasps for air* Holy Merlin... you certainly know how to write a hot sex scene!
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  • From slygriff21 on November 13, 2008
    Oh this was an amazing story. You absolutely have to do a sequal. I hope you do! Great writing!

    Tiffany
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  • From neelix on November 10, 2008
    I noticed you removed my review :(

    I feel sad that you didn't take it in the way it was intended - as contructive critisim. I really enjoyed this story and I was only pointing out what you as a writer could do to make the reading experince more enjoyable.

    I didn't say I didn't like the story.

    *miserable this end*
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  • From iamtherealmaverick on November 10, 2008
    Dude, this was awesome! Really well done. ~M
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 09, 2008
    This was a wonderful story. I hope that you will make a sequel to this one. I would love to see whether or not Severus and Hermione get married and if they do get married, will they start a family.
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  • From dannilawless on November 09, 2008
    Wow loved it!!! You should relly write a sequal! Your a really talented writer. I hope to read more of your work soon!
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  • From amsev on November 09, 2008
    What a sexy story! I also enjoyed Ron as the antagonist. But Severus -- yummmmmmmyyyyyy!
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