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Reviews for Why Not Ron

By : ronsmistress
  • From laurenlouisa on October 05, 2010
    Loved it!!!!! Loved the way Ron handled her father and that the mother was the more unreasonable one. You did say in one chapter that Ron would email pansy later and I had a good laugh at that. Story line and smut! Good work!

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  • From newtothis on October 05, 2010
    i like ron,, is a good guy, and with a little bit of training. great boyfriend and lover.
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  • From Killthebeast on July 07, 2010
    I know i have said it often, but you are my absolute favourite writer. I love the pairing Pansy/Ron sooo much and would like to read more. Hope you have the time and great ideas.

    *bows my head in respect*

    Beast (Patrick)
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  • From arkenstone007 on May 05, 2010
    Ron wouldn't know what e-mail is let alone be able to send one as electronics don't work with magic as well as the fact that one would need an internet connection which requires a connection to a provider. It should be "owl" the details.
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  • From Dracosslut on April 11, 2009
    I love Ron/Pansy as a pairing. Lovely story.
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  • From Mellyissa on November 24, 2008
    I would love to see a sequel to this story ron and pansy in married life would kids! Great story just sad it had to end
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  • From credfield on November 20, 2008
    A very interesting story. I've been very entertained too. Can't wait for your next update.
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  • From nonentity on November 18, 2008
    I like how the plotline with Pansy's parents are moving. I would take out the whole bit about invitations being sent to individuals but being returned in sets etc. It implies that everyone is coming as part of a couple, plus only 45 invitations or so went out, making a potential 35 couples unlikely. It's easier to skip the math and not mention it at all. Pansy's fiddling with Ron's sleeve is a nice detail.
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  • From DarQuing on November 16, 2008
    That's completely okay. I've read authors where it was months between postings. :P

    I think it shows maturity on Ron's part to invite Mr. and Mrs. Parkinson. :)
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  • From credfield on November 16, 2008
    A very good story. I am a big fan of unconventional ships and this is a very good story. Few spelling mistakes and missing words but you're doing quite well. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your updates.
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  • From architect on November 13, 2008
    I'm normally a Ron and Hermione shipper, however Ron and Pansy go so well together that I htink no one can complain. Please continue, I love this story and its romantic and (so far) optimistic. The whole subplot involving the Weasley's and the Parkinson's is interesting. By the way kudos to the cliffhanger ending, I hope Pansy and Ron stick together no matter what.
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  • From nonentity on November 13, 2008
    I really like the Molly/Arthur and Parkinsons subplots. I think I'd like to see more indication of the softness in Molly, even though I like that she flips out about the marriage and thinks nasty things about Pansy. I'd also like to see more interaction with their friends. Why didn't they confide in anyone about the job (which was pre-Pansy) or about a possible wedding? It just seems rather odd to me. The bit with Misty's adorable.
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  • From nonentity on November 13, 2008
    I like that Ron's a virgin and he got his sex education through romance novels. From his confidence earlier, I assumed he was experienced; virgin!Ron who isn't horrible in bed is a nice change of pace. I don't think guys ever talk about foreplay if they talk about shagging girls though, so I'm not sure that Draco can be considered bad in bed just due to his comments. Unless he's not gushing over specific body parts, indicating that he doesn't even notice them.
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  • From nonentity on November 13, 2008
    Food flirting. That's cute. Usually in fanfics only one person flirts via food, while the other person gets aroused and grumpy. I think Ron should have carried her to the loveseat instead of the bed though, if he wasn't trying to scare her.
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  • From nonentity on November 13, 2008
    I vote for the spacing. In books, if they don't have spacing, you can at least figure out where you are by the section of the page. On the computer, it's quite hard to figure out what line on what paragraph you're on. I tend to skip most unspaced stories because squinting is annoying.

    Mmmm, shirtless Ron. Poor Pansy. I like how she's not particularly confident (so few teenage girls are) but not a shrinking violet either.
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