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Reviews for The Law

By : MariaTeresaQuintanar
  • From ANON - Karen on November 11, 2008
    I like this story. However, I am confused about some things. Timing of this story: is it after or before Voldemort's fall. There are some small continuity problems. Early on, it seems Molly and Hermione aren't happy with each other, and Hermione is angry with Ron. However, when he comes to bring the wolfsbane, they seem to be on very friendly terms. Also, Molly isn't upset at all finding out Hermione is pregnant. When Ron brings the potion, he states how hard it was for him to get there, yet Sirius, Harry, Poppy and Molly have no such issues. Why?

    Again, I like this story, and enjoy reading it. I look forward to more updates. Well done!
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  • From Sampdoria on November 11, 2008
    "only Remus" will be more than enough when you present him as strong and sexy as you do here:-) Thank you for two more chapters, I really liked them!
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  • From Larrabee on November 11, 2008
    Spell checks:

    Chapter 3:

    1st Section:

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  • From catysmom1028 on November 10, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From KellyJCR on November 10, 2008
    Well aren't they they the randiest couple ever. I love that Ron walked inon them serves him right. Looking forward to more I can't get enough of these two they are a favorite of mine. Well done!!!!
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  • From KellyJCR on November 10, 2008
    Thank you , Thank you , Thank you. I am so thrilled! This story is interesting and I can't wait to see where the plot goes. Can't wait for more. Very well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on November 10, 2008
    I LOVE IT...more please!
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  • From Sampdoria on November 10, 2008
    I luuurve stories where Hermione gets both Remus and Bill, I sincerely hope this is such a story:-)) Very interesting first two chapters, I look forward to read more!!!
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