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Reviews for Bundle of Joy

By : LadyTuesday
  • From FieryPhoenix on May 30, 2015
    I absolutely adored this story and will be adding it to my favourites list. I am also off to search the archives for the sequel you hinted at. I so hope you wrote it!!

    Thank you for this highly refreshing take on this amazing couple coming together. You weave words beautifully and I enjoyed each chapter thoroughly.
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  • From Trelweny on May 23, 2013
    That was the most charming and delightful read I've had in a while. Very deep and heartfelt, insightful in a believable way into both primary characters with a easy feel for supporting characters as well. I loved the letters, how Severus' gift of his mother's stationary set worked with the story and was worked into our canan knowledge smoothly, and the ending scene was priceless in its warmth and humor. I could visualize everything so clearly. Wonderful.

    Thank you so much for writing.
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  • From ANON - emi on April 29, 2013
    Loved this story. One of the best SS/HG stories I've ever read. Great job!!
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  • From CelticGoddess1985 on January 20, 2010
    Bravo! What a great fic!!! Yes I think there should be a sequel if only to find out if they have a boy or girl or twins and how well everyone is doing.

    Kind Regards
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  • From snapelover2009 on August 22, 2009
    i loved this story and would love to see a sequal for it!!!!
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 10, 2009
    I have 4 words for you "Brilliant Story" !! Sequel please?
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  • From TempestRuby on May 07, 2009
    I think that I will track you down and smack you if you don't write a freaking sequel.
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  • From AvivaAria on April 28, 2009
    I loved this story, please I would love a sequel your such a great writer, I've read everything you've written in this one day, so please I can't wait for updates and/or new stories. Please just keep writing.
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  • From oliversangel on April 02, 2009
    AWWWW!! Happy tears and WAFF's abound!! I adored this story. I loved their wity and biting letters, and it was just completely fabulous. The pacing was lovely and appropriate, and I must say that I am dying for a sequel here. Please please write it, if you haven't started already? I don't mind a bit of fluff. You are a phenomenal writer, and thank you for taking the time to share this lovely lovely story with us.

    XXOO
    Ero
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  • From acidqueen on March 02, 2009
    Ok, im gonna begin this review with a little critisism. Snapes letter to Hermione. No man, no member of the males speices, no person with a penis would ever write a letter like that. And now, i am completely depressed, because no man would ever write like that, and they should! It was heartful, passionate, funny, and most importantly, honest. Tell me, do you do classes. Because i know more than a few males who could do with a few lessons on how to be truly romantic. Ok, flowers are sweet, but they die. confectionary has calories and jewelrey is awkward because you have to match it with other pieces and it has to go with the out fit etc. But, a letter...a proper letter; hand written, not done on a computer, not sent as an e-mail, or as a text...but a proper letter, is the most romantic thing in the world. And im pissed because no man would do that!! Ok, maybe there are a few, but not enough. So, my critism is not so much you, but aimed at the entire male population...damn them!!

    As for the story on the whole, i loved it. Their reactions where not only (in my opinion) true to their original incarnation by Miss J.K. herself, but also true to life. If any woman woke up, after a night like that, she would probably cry and feel alone and depressed. And given Snape's life, i am hardly surprised that he done a bunk the morning after the night before.

    Oh, and his gift...so sweet, and so perfect. Even with out it's past history, it was perfect.

    And i love the reaction of both the staff and students at Snapes sunny disposition.

    Over all, i thought that this story rocked.

    Concerning a sequal...i would like to see how much this new found love changes Snapes over-all personality, and the way he treats his students, and his general world view. Perhaps seeing how he deals with being a father for the fist time, especily if it is a girl. I cant quite see him giving piggy back rides to be honest. And christ, what if it was a girl, how the hell would Snape deal with her dating and such. And just seeing Hermione dealing with Snape through all of this. I think that it would be kind of cool to see a story where each chapter is a different stage in their childs life, watching Snape trying to adapt to the changes in his child; baby, puberty, sweet 16's, marriage, having children of their own. And also going through the harder stages of married life. But that is just me.

    I would say though, that where you ended this story was perfect. You gave enough information that it wasnt open ended, but left it open enough that ones imagination could take flight. And this in my opinion, is the number one quality that makes a great writer. I cant stand stories where all questions are answered, because you cant play around with the story at all in your own head.

    Again, i think that this is a brilliant piece of work, and i think that you are a great writer. I will definetly look out for new stories from you.
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  • From wishyouwere on March 02, 2009
    This is a great story, and thanks for writing it!
    However, I do think that an epilogue may be needed. I have so many questions that feel unanswered like how her friends respond to the pregnancy, how the pregnancy progresses, etc.
    I am not talking a novel but a wee bit of a wrap.
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  • From ElvisJesse on February 27, 2009
    Wonderful!! That was wonderful. A sequel would be great! Even if it all would mostly be fluff!
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  • From chickaboo on February 27, 2009
    I would love to read a sequel. I can definitely use some fluff in my life at the moment. What a fantastic story, I adored every moment of this. Anyway, looking forward, and hoping for, the sequel...~Eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 26, 2009
    Brava!! That was original, fun, and lovely! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and talents with us. I really hope you write that sequel, because I want to know if it's a girl? lol

    Thank you again!
    HG4eva
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  • From blesseddarkness on February 26, 2009
    Please write a sequel!! I'm emotionally vested in the hopes of a sequel!!! I want to know what happens please!!! Your writing stly is wonderful and you capoture a side of Snape that I've always believed was there.
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