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Reviews for Pillow Talk

By : Piccolo999
  • From cellester on May 30, 2011
    amazing i loved this story please continue it!
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  • From ANON - chm01 on July 18, 2009
    I like it very much! and I hope you update soon! as for me I prefer maledom but I think you should balace it.
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  • From LondonMarie on April 03, 2009
    MORE!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - thewall28304 on December 21, 2008
    Please update soon. I really like the story and want to see where it goes. I love H/Hr and I like how the story is going so far. Keep writing great kinky scenes between them and I'm sure they'll get alot hotter as the fic continues!
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  • From ANON - caitlin on December 06, 2008
    I love this story it is great. The kinks are fun too...I have a suggestion maybe make it a foursome...Ron, Harry, Ginny, AND Hermione
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  • From ANON - dark inspirer on December 04, 2008
    If you want ideas, you got it.
    Animagus: Donkey show or snake 'toy'.
    Gillyweed: Underwater adventure.
    Polyjuice: switched identity.
    Invisiblily: public excapade.
    Undercover: Satisfy the one in a chair from under the table.
    Train ride: Best by muggle train.
    Levitation: Similar concept with handcuffs.
    Cosplay: Could be maid or something.
    Tentacle: Extension from Animagus.
    Publicity: Taken from 'keeping it in the family'(or something like that). Ron was satisfied in the common room during a party by sitting position hiding the fact by her skirt.
    These are some ideas that came up, the question is will you use them (evil lol).
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2008
    wow
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  • From ANON - Adriana on November 27, 2008
    such a dirty story..i love it! hehe
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  • From ANON - thewall28304 on November 18, 2008
    Please continue with this story,I like it already. It's a tragic shame that H/Hr didn't happen,but it's great to see stories like this where they can be together. Keep up the story and I hope to see more updates very soon.
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  • From ANON - TCM on November 15, 2008
    This story I belive has quite a good potential to become great please make more parts.
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  • From on November 14, 2008
    Great start mate, first off I would like to say that could you make Harry the more dominant one, as I think it would be great.

    I like that Harry and Hermione is having an affear.

    I like the first smut, can't wait to see more, please update soon.

    Could you read my story when you got time.
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  • From DarQuing on November 11, 2008
    Holy crap that was hot! :D

    Everybody's pretty much known that Harry really loves Hermione (slashers say Draco or Severus) while Ron really loves Luna.

    Ooh! You could write a chapter with Luna as part of a threesome. :)
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  • From tommye on November 11, 2008
    very good story. i like it just the way it is. i hope they both get caught. that would be fun to read.

    cant wait to read more
    please update very soon
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  • From on November 11, 2008
    Harry&Hermionefan (Email Hidden) 2008-11-10 id # 3001245817
    The story could have been interesting if it where not an affair fic. So it is just plain boring. A waste of time and space.

    your empty criticism is a lack waste of time and space. just because you didn't like it doesn't mean its dull and meaningless. I on the other hand had quite enjoyed the intro and hope the summary would unravel it's self once the story line gets deeper
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  • From SalonKitty on November 10, 2008
    Okay, I'll weigh in on plot vs. porn. I will always prefer PW/P if it's done well, however, straight up porn is just fine if you're sticking to solid characterization and some good reasons your protagonists are together. I like your premise of each chapter exploring another kink with our heroes, but if it's going to extend beyond a certain amount, I would recommend some plot to keep the story interesting and moving forward. As long as this suggested take-down of the Ministry doesn't become too convoluted and distract from the action happening in the bedroom, then it could work out fine. If you discover that you are spending entirely too much time trying to work the details, I would hasten to keep it too a minimum so that we can enjoy each escapade between Harry and Hermione. Now that you've mentioned it, of course, I'm really intrigued to see where this will all go. I love Harry/Hermione affair fics, especially when the sex is raunchy and perverted. I've commented this before, but I see these stories as a nice hand gesture to JKR. The idea that her chosen partners for them didn't quite work out and that Harry and Hermione get each other on same basic carnal level that Ron and Ginny don't understand always amuses me.

    I would be careful with Hermione, though. Unless you're going to give us some backstory to illustrate Hermione's change from harpy to horny, then I'd watch you don't go too far astray from her character. Personally, seeing as her bossy nature has always slightly antagonized Harry, having her take it to extremes for sex and getting a completely different reaction out of him is well worth writing about. Good luck. Nice intro.
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