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Reviews for A New You

By : freakenbree
  • From Gypsii on August 01, 2011
    looove it! I only hope that you do continue this story!
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  • From toads70 on December 13, 2008
    that was really good!
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  • From Darkless on November 29, 2008
    I thought that this one-shot would be a great beginning of quite a tale.

    I feel like it should seem like Severus and Harry got together all too fast, yet it doesn't. Suddenly you see someone in a new light and all your preconceived notions about said person become null and void. With understanding comes respect, and soon a fondness. A mutual passion blindsides them and they're hooked. So, not 'sudden' but unlooked for...a gift.

    Very nicely done.
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  • From SocialRiot on November 28, 2008
    well I definitely enjoyed this oneshot! I love the length of it - short enough not to get bored, long enough to keep entertained. Excellent writing, characterization, etc. A few minor errors but that's all.

    Looking forward to more Snarry =]
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  • From anniea on November 14, 2008
    it would have been fun to find out what happened with the deatheaters and voldemort and not to mention WHY THE HELL THEY HAD TO LEAVE IN THE FIRST PLACE! you know.......maybe a little epilouge to up follow up on the story!
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  • From Alaine on November 12, 2008
    That was a very enjoyable read. I love the characters and the dialogue, especially the last few lines cracked me up. Also I really like the fact that you kept this a one-shot, instead of dividing it into more chapters. I do hope you will consider adding an epilogue.
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  • From CanadianGinger on November 12, 2008
    You definitely need to write an epilogue for this story. :)
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  • From Selene89 on November 11, 2008
    I like how you have left it open ended. It lets the reader decide what happens next. And it is just a one-shot.
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