Reviews for The AffairBy : soldiersgirl0709 |
What a wonderful story. Hermione has babies! I'm so glad H&L got to have a family, 4 and one on the way, just wow. I'm sad it took Draco 12 years to connect with his father but I'm glad Lucius never gave up. I wondered about Draco's life a little, is he married, children/child? I know the story is not about him. It's sad that he appears to be unattached, having not mentioned anyone or bringing anyone with him to dinner.
I really loved this story, infedlity and all. I especially like the quotes you had at the beginning of every chapter.
Thank you for sharing your time and imagination.
Awww, I think I have a new cavity from the sweetness. The sex is always hot between them but they truly are happy together.
I'm glad Draco didn't flip out at his father. I hope he does see that his father is happy and I'm glad he acknowledged to himself his mother used him against his father. Narcissa reaction was less than I expected. Lucius is right, she will get her place back in society, though I really really wish it wouldn't happen. She should be as miserable as she made Lucius the last 10 years. Draco should quit coddling her, maybe he'll quit seeing her as fragile and delicate after her little display.
Well I'm surprised that Ron handle that as well as he did. I think he knew deep down even before Lucius. I do hope Ron finds love and that after some time he and Hermione can be friends. They may not have been married as long as N&L but they knew each other since they were 11years old, so about 22 years. I can't wait or the end of the Malfoys.
Finally! I just hope their spouses don't Avada them.
Wow, I don't think Narcissa is considering how he could make her life miserable. He could cut her off. That would be like death to her. You have written a cold, spoiled, and vendictive Narcissa, that takes no responsibility for her own actions. I love it.
She should have just ended it. She doesn't love Ron the way you love your spouse, more like a friend. Please please let L&H be together in the end, or I may pull my hair out. See your writing provokes strong emotions.lol
Uh oh!
It doesn't bother me that Hermione is having an affair. Technically she has fallen out of love with Ron and in love with Lucius. It would be worse if it were multiple wizards or just a random one nighter. Ron abandoned her after they lost the baby. I get he's not dealing with it but something like that kinda of loss will either bring the couple together or tear them apart. Great story, I'm really enjoying it.
Wow, Ron's not cheating. Just spending all his time wallowing, instead of dealing with reality. I'm really glad Draco has finally realized his mother is a bitch. Okay, probably not exactly what he thinks but he knows she is purposely wanting to make his father unhappy. I hope he talks to his father and encourages him to do what will make him happy. I don't get why in most stories Harry only talks to Ron when there's trouble between R&H. I'm happy he sees she is healing but why not talk to her?
All I can say about Hermione's fears are screw what people think. They could just hold their heads high and ignore the ignorance. Great chapter. I'm so glad they found time to be together, not just a bunch of quickies.
Poor delusional Draco... Also still clinging to the hatred. He's so observant of L&H but he can't see how miserable his parents marriage is. Maybe it cause his mother uses and manipulates him? Hermione bested him in everything at school and defeated Voldemort. Cause let's be honest Harry couldn't have even survived his first year without her, let alone found the horacruxes. Sure he dueled old Voldy but he definitely needed Hermione's brains to get there. Great story, I'm really enjoying it.
It's about damn time. No regrets, hallelujah!
Seriously, Hermione is just making herself more miserable than she already was by trying to stay in her dead marriage. For god sake where in the world is Ron? Not at work, Harry's or mommies. Your a very good writer, your stories pull me in and make me feel so many emotions. That's what's well written story should do. Kudos!
Finally. That line Hermione made has been decimated. Now Hermione needs to get over her guilt and they both need to get rid of their baggage. (Ron & Narcissa) Holding onto something irreparable is just a waste of time.
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