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Reviews for The Affair

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From LadyofClunn on December 09, 2008
    Don't fret? Don't fret? I am bawling! I know it's the right thing to do and all that, but I find myself not caring in the least!

    Great chapters!
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  • From ANON - kayleigh on December 09, 2008
    When I should be studying for my finals, your story has been one very delightful study break for me. I really hope that everything will work out for Hermione and Lucius, they deserve to be happy and have children! I look forward to your next post!
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on December 09, 2008
    OMG that was so ..... I have no word for it ;) Wonderful story,. Really wonderful., I soo hope you have a happy ending in mind, i really hate miserable endings., :( let them come together pwetty please *puppydog eyes*
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  • From KellyJCR on December 09, 2008
    What a Bitch! Ron and Narcissa have every right to be pissed off but, Narcissa gives new meaning to the word livid. I'm not sure why Hermione conceded so easily to Rons request to never see Lucius again. I would think that being married one would want to exhaust all possibilities before calling an end to a marriage. Hermione seems to be in love with Lucius however, does she really want her old relationship with Ron back, they were in love not so long ago. Is the fact that she has come clean to Ron about everything she has been feeling and thinking change the situation with her need for Lucius. I feel so torn I want her marriage to work and I want her in a relationship with Lucius an wer both know that isn't possible. How do you make your mind up as an author? Naricssa on the other had needs to let go of all the resentment and anger she has for Lucius. She loved him once and she has let herself become obsessed with the payback she so despretley wants. I think she want Lucius to be as miserable as she seems to be, at this point I don't think she gets any joy from anything or anybody. Maybe Draco will open his eyes and step in. I am dying to see the aftermath. Well done!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on December 09, 2008
    Omg, you can't leave us hanging here! That's soo omg!! I'd sooo love to see an update!
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on December 09, 2008
    Uh oh, the jig is up! The tryst against the door was fabulous, though. What a way to go.
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  • From ANON - Sandra on December 08, 2008
    That is so cruel. Please update soon
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  • From smmz79 on December 08, 2008
    OMG... wow and narcissa never notices anything with her husband other than how miserable he is and she caught that.... wo how are hermione and lucius going talk through this... and harry is noticing too ok so maybe draco will not be the first one to realize what is going on
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  • From CarlaRush on December 08, 2008
    ut oh, I believe the shit is about to hit the fan...or perhaps Lucius can come up with a quick lie. Perhaps they should seek respective divorces...
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  • From Gertie on December 08, 2008
    Gasp! I kept feeling that Lucius was playing with fire, wanting to get caught, the way he kept showing up at Hermoine's house. And now they have been- wow. What a way to end a chapter. The fall out will be interesting- I can't wait.
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  • From smmz79 on December 08, 2008
    wow that was close but they always seem to get caught in these situations... i wonder when they will not be quick enough someone is going to catch them and i am voting on draco he seems way to curious
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  • From ANON - Steph on December 08, 2008
    I have to say, I am on team Ron right now. Poor guy, he just needs time and support, and for his wife to not be cheating on him.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 08, 2008
    Uhoh... They are screwed! What a humiliation to have your underwear out in the open on a ball! They had it coming, though, what can I say...

    What concernes Ron. In my eyes cheating doesn't get "better" because the other did the same thing. It's just wrong in a (supposed) monogamous relationship. That doesn't mean that there aren't situations in which it is completely understandable to look for comfort elsewhere. Still that doesn't make it right.

    I actually think that that's exactly Hermione's problem. She does not feel guilty because she's still in love with Ron, but because she knows that she shouldn't be cheating. No matter how she feels. Though that's exactly the problem: Sometimes you just can't fight your feelings. We'll see what will happen next!

    May I borrow Lucius for the next party I attend? Please?
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  • From TriniMinx on December 08, 2008
    Ahhhhhhhhhhh, you must LOVE Narcissa. She's good at details.
    You say it will work out...define that exactly. LOL

    I'm still on Team Ron. Bad Hermione. Bad Lucius.


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  • From Citten on December 08, 2008
    oh so not a good place to have this converstation!
    hi sorry to now just reviewing but i have just started reading your story and i have finally caught up to where you are now! :) i will agree that i usually dont like fics that deal with adultery but i can understand the feelings asoated with this situation. but i did feel bad for ron a couple of chapters ago that he was not do the samething. though with the way he was acting i had assumed the same was happening though now i kinda feel guilty but on the other hand i feel like lucius and dont feel guily at all, ron though did bring this upon his self by not talking and avoiding hermione.
    i do hope that you dont keep us waiting to see what happens though cause this is a very private conversation happening in a very, very pubilc place. eak! i am going to go crazy waiting i just know it! :)
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