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Reviews for The Affair

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on December 08, 2008
    Oh no! I knew it was going to come out sooner or later, but wow! Leave it to Ron to do the exploding in justified moral outrage in public. LOL! Lovely story! Keep up the good work.
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  • From beigelexus01 on December 07, 2008
    Ahhh.....must update. I am so loving this story. Lucius is usually written as such an ass in most fics, but this one he is human and it is so nice to see that change. Such a wonderful story. Now update!! I demand it!!
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  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on December 07, 2008
    Oh boy! And it hits the fan!...I think.... How in the world are Lucius and Hermione going to talk their way out of this one?
    I can just see Hermione getting red in the face and feeling extremely guilty...while Lucius looks smug and not guilty in the least.
    ...I kept thinking that Narcissa was going to pluck Hermione's underwear out of Lucius' pocket! Eurg! I'm so glad she didn't! :-)
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  • From carha on December 07, 2008
    OMG major cliffhanger! Incredible chapters hun, definately can't wait to see what happens when it all comes out!
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  • From KellyJCR on December 07, 2008
    I have to back up a little I was away and just got around to reading. I am upset that Ron is not having an affair. I feel horrible that he has been silently suffering the entire time. I am not condoning that two wrongs make a right its just I feel so awful for Ron. He was doing what he thought was for the best. Hermione just moved on beacuse she was willing to accept their sons death and Ron tried to pretend it never happened. I don't know how to feel about the whole situation it just plain sucks. I love the turns your story is taking and the cliffie you just left us with is killing me. I can't wait to hear all the fallout I'm sure where will be some spectacular fireworks. Well done!!!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on December 07, 2008
    Oh my god.

    Are they caught?

    I hope so...I want it all out in the open...I love this story!!

    Looking forward to more!

    Love,

    Vic xx
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  • From ICKYintimidation on December 07, 2008
    why??? why did you do that to me? how could you leave it there? lol...jk
    this story is soooo great... and i was actually feeling nervous for hermione and lucius in those last paragraphs.
    can't wait for an update! i have to know how they get out of this one... or if they do. lol
    oh... and i'm glad you liked the picture i drew... you really have inspired me to draw more lucius and hermione pics... and if you'd like, i'll let you know when they're uploaded.
    you are so awesome. i've said it before, and i'll say it again... your lucius stories are the best that i've read on the internet... and i've read a couple a few times, because they are so good.
    anyway... can't wait for the next chapter! :hug:
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  • From sassenach on December 07, 2008
    Another great update! Thanks! I hope the Christmas spirit moves you to update again very soon - because that was quite a cliffhanger you left us with! :) How many chapters will this one be? Thanks!
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  • From vampgrl23 on December 07, 2008
    Hehe. You wouldn't happen to want to make it three chapters for the X-mas season, would you? 'Cuz we would like it. *hint hint* *wink wink*
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  • From ANON - dtd on December 07, 2008
    WOW hot hot hot in the smoking room. ohh and I loved the find of the sequins. I'm trying to feel a little badly for Ron, but I don't, for a whole year he has been treating Hermione badly and the Lucius/Hermione relationship is just too darn enticing.
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  • From LadyofClunn on December 07, 2008
    Oh. My. God.

    What a place to be discovered.

    I am hiding behind my table waiting for all hell to break loose.

    I somewhat hope that they will shock everyone, clear the air and then apparate away together. But life is not a fairy tale, is it?

    That chapter was simply hot. Nicely done.
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  • From happybunny on December 07, 2008
    *happybunny hyperventilates*

    Yipes! Are they caught, or will they come up with a story to tell Ron, Narcissa, and Harry?

    Umm, I'm getting the feeling that this is the type of story that could end with none of them being together. Ron and Hermione divorce, Lucius and Narcissa divorce, but Hermione and Lucius don't end up together. Kind of like Annie Hall, except not quite...

    I would really like a happy ending, though I have to admit, a not quite happy ending is probably more realistic. either way, love your writing and your fast updates!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 07, 2008
    OOOOO as the plot thickens! *waits anxiously for another update instead of studying for finals like she should be* What can I say, Lucius and Snape are my weakness and I'll choose them over studying genetics any day...even if I enjoy genetics.
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  • From Ithilwen on December 07, 2008
    Oh Shit!! That was what came to me when I read the last of the chapter!

    Well the cat's out of the bag, how will they explain this???
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  • From mrsthedke on December 07, 2008
    NO NO NO NO NO!!!! What is wrong with you!?!?!?! You can't leave it just hanging like that? Ther eis no way!!! OMG OMG OMG!

    OK. With that out of my system, I am really enjoying this story. it would appear as if they are completely busted... I wonder how Lucius will try to play this off? Will he let Hermione speak? Will Hermione's undergarment come back into play? You are evil leaving it there and not updating again straight away. But I still love it and will wait not so patiently for the next chapter. Excellent work thus far! Can't wait to see how this wraps up and then read what you are working on next!
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