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Reviews for The Affair

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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on December 07, 2008
    Good one ;) It is a pity to see Ron finally try, and then Hermione pushes him away. I guess you can expect that kind of behaviour when you leave someone in the cold for so long. Can't wait for an update!
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  • From on December 06, 2008
    I had the blinkies. I didn't see that coming with Ron and just how right he is. Harry...I love him. Wonderfully romantic scene for Lucius and Hermione, even if it's a little bitter sweet. I understand Hermione more than I want. Brilliant updates (3 chapters for me) thanks so much and I'm relieved that you and the children are feeling better. Flu sucks bum. Have a great weekend.
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  • From on December 05, 2008
    Narcissa the witch - seems to be starting with the wrong letter :) So, Ron is really just wasting away & not cheating? That's surprising. Well, not really that surprising. Why would he get off his duff when he can just whine about his wife slipping away? I feel sorry for him too though! This really is complex & I'm almost scared to see how things end...
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  • From Gertie on December 05, 2008
    Now you've gone and confused and conflicted me. It would have been much simpler if Ron was out cheating. Now I am left feeling guilty for wanting Lucius and Hermoine together.
    Glad to hear your family is feeling better. A happy and health Goddess means regular updates and more stories to come.( I really am a selfish creature)
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  • From LadyofClunn on December 05, 2008
    Yes, I am actually shocked. Ron is not as much of an idiot as it seemed. Harry is right, if he can't overcome his depression and seek out help it will be too late for reconciliation. I am ashamed to say that I don't want to see the end of Lucius' and Hermione's affair in case he sees reason. That your story is titled The Affair makes me fear the worst, as it does not exactly suggest something permanent. Sorry, Ron, got to take sides here.
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 05, 2008
    what a guy, keep all the emotions hidden inside yourself, and drink it away, I was sure that he was cheating. I love the interaction with draco and his mom. Finding out she is more troubled with him being happy, that who he is in bed with. She does seen a bit heartless.
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  • From CarlaRush on December 05, 2008
    Delightful chapter, although we didn't see our couple we did see what other people are thinking. I do believe that the crap will hit the fan soon.
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on December 05, 2008
    Wonderful as always. Really nice how naive Harry seems here ;)
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on December 05, 2008
    Sorry, I forgot to log in--the Anon above is mine, and no, I don't like Narcissa's petty behavior very much.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 05, 2008
    All right, whether or not you decide to put Lucius and Hermione together by the end or not, his marriage to that vain, shallow, viciously embittered woman has got to end. Even if Hermione and Ron get back together, Lucius needs to be freed. With his emotions once again his own he can find someone to stay happy with, as long as that vindictive cow is out of the way. Congratulations, by the way, on creating a character that I feel free to dislike so whole-heartedly! She reminds me of my brother's ex-wife. Excellent characterizations for the update.
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  • From Cliobella on December 05, 2008
    Aahhh! (Bangs head on desk) Ron wasn
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  • From smmz79 on December 05, 2008
    wow what a great update... ok so ron is not cheating but in a sense he is cheating with with his alcohol... but everyone deals with grief differently and i wish that he could fix all of the wrongs that have been made but i am afraid that he may have already lost hermione??? and GO figure narcissa would only want lucius miserable... and draco is definitely observant... great chap
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  • From DB1 on December 05, 2008
    @20

    great story i liove it. please update soon
    *DB*
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on December 05, 2008
    Yes, I am shocked Ron is not seeking affection elsewhere. You got me there. So he is just drowning his sorrows. That is pretty sad after all this time. I was going to say pathetic, but I am going to cut him some slack. Narcissa is a piece of work. She doesn't care if her husband has an affair, she just doesn't want him to be happy. She is a sick puppy.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on December 05, 2008
    Excellent work! I'm glad to hear you and yours are feeling better. That stomach flu has a kick like a mule. Take the risk on new, riskier plots! The only failure in doing so is in giving up before you give it a chance. Great update and I can't wait for more.
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