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Reviews for The Affair

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - maddie50 on December 05, 2008
    Their time together sounds beautiful. Their marriages are so cold and lack true affection. Why maintain that for the sake of society?
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on December 05, 2008
    Ooo, Draco is too perceptive. Well, no one said he is stupid. However, I can see Lucius falling for Hermione.
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  • From TriniMinx on December 05, 2008
    Chpt. 20

    Seriously. Seriously? Seriously!
    Sorry I had to get Grey's Anatonmy on you, but OMG.
    Seriously?! Ron's NOT cheating???
    Oooooooooooooooooooooh, that changes everything.
    I'm on Team Ron. I can't help it. It's just wrong now. Not that cheating is right, but I mean I thought he was screwing some witch like Lav-Lav and leaving poor, sad Hermione. Now I realize he's just drinking himself silly because he's super depressed too...well, SHE cheated on him first. That changes everything.
    I wish this was a Hermione/Ron story now....and then they realize the error of them both being stupid and find love in each other again.
    Sadness.
    :`o(

    I think I'm still going to keep reading though, although usually at a chapter this like I would stop and shake my head, 'no-no.' But it IS you Miss S_G :o) So I shall continue reading this story...for now :o)
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  • From gtbioteach on December 04, 2008
    Wow. Just wow. You knew when they really would get together that it would be hot. Wow.

    I'm very taken in by this story. I love the characters and I love the unique story line. I still, though, can't wait to see what happens when they are discovered by Ron or Narcissa - you know that is coming! I'm also very curious about exactly what Ron is up to. Going with the boozing, something tells me it is not an affair of his own. I actually do feel sorry for your Ron. He must learn to come to terms with his grief. Right now, it is consuming and destroying him. Unfortunately, I do think that irreparable damage to his marriage.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. I love your work. You are now my favorite authos in ff land. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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  • From Gertie on December 04, 2008
    Now that I am back working again I
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  • From Clare1984 on December 04, 2008
    I think this is the first time I've reviewed this one but after reading chapter 19, I just had to review. I hate adultery - bad memories - but the way you've written this, I'm so torn about their affair.

    It's so sad how Ron and Hermione have drifted apart and I can't make up my mind if Ron is actually having an affair or not. It's just incredibly well written, the way Lucius and Hermione have fallen for each other and I'm rooting for them to be together. Of course, I'm probably half rooting for them anyway cos I don't like canon Ron and Hermione.

    I get so excited when I see a new chapter is up because I just don't know how it's going to turn out. Although. now Draco has his suspicions, It's only a matter of time before someone finds out as well. It looks like it's going to turn into love for the both of them and that just opens up a whole can of worms.

    This has to be one of your best stories ever, the situation and feelings are just so real. I better stop writing before I start creeping you out.

    I seriously can't wait to read more though!
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  • From Shiv5468 on December 04, 2008
    I really don't see why they don't both do the snesible thing, get divorces and get on with the rest of their lives. Scandal is nothing compared to the misery of living with someone you don't love. Their partners have already broken their marriage commitments, so there's no moral obligation to stay. And a man who is prepared to murder his way to power isn't one that worries about a bit of scandal.

    Kill Ron, frame Narcissa, problem solved.
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  • From on December 03, 2008
    This was sweet and sad... loved the "alone time", but the reality check makes it bittersweet. I hope you're all feeling better. It's going around & nothing is more disgusting than cleaning up after sick kids when you're sick too! Good Luck!
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  • From ANON - Steph on December 03, 2008
    Another great 2 chapters - but did anyone else see them in Diagon Alley?? Im looking forward to Harry's inut in the whole messy Hermione/Ron situation. Poor you with the stomach flu - hope you all feel better soon!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 03, 2008
    i hope you feel better, and this is my favorite chapter so far. thank yoiu for posting it while sick bye
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  • From CarlaRush on December 03, 2008
    So sorry to hear you aren't feeling well. We have a bunch of bugs floating around in our little world too. Nice chapter, but it seems Hermione has created a stalemate. We all know that can't last long. Get well soon.
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  • From carha on December 03, 2008
    I'm sorry you aren't feeling good hun. The stomach bug is going around here too, and I already got it. Thankfully mine only lasted 3 days. The one here has a short span. Hope you feel better soon hun, and as always, loved it!
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on December 03, 2008
    beautiful, sexy and so very sad. To relaize that you've loved in the past, but have never truly been deeply inlove until this moment must be a true shock to the system. I really do love this story. On a personal note i hope you and your children are feeling better.
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  • From Ithilwen on December 03, 2008
    I'm really not fond of Draco. Usually I am but not this time. But, I can sort of understand him too. Wierd as it is.

    It's so sad that they have found eachother and could have a future with all he saw, but the the things that would come out if they divorced their spouses. It would so not be pretty.

    But one thing, I'm assuming they are using protection of some sort or can we expect a surprise comming along soon enough?

    Sorry about the Stomach flu. Hope you feel better soon!!!
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on December 03, 2008
    Story was great! And yes, I can say stomach flu (it hit my household last week). I hope you and your family get over it soon. Excellent work and update when you can.
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