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By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - maddie50 on December 02, 2008
    I think you communicated the all consuming passion of their experience brilliantly.
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on December 02, 2008
    Impressive detail from both Hermione's and Lucius's perspective. I am assuming you are female (if not, sorry--no problem here). I guess I could take a peek at your profile, but I have not done so yet. Anyway, I have noticed the description of a male's orgasm can be lacking in many stories. That is not the case here. Vivid imagery abounds. Oh yeah!
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  • From on December 01, 2008
    I really get that love but not exactly in love. *sighs* I enjoy the intensity, it leaps off the screen, and I do hope Hermione is wrong and that things don't end badly. Thanks.
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  • From on December 01, 2008
    I certainly don't condone cheating - but, I can't blame them. It's so sad that we feel like we have to put on a show and fit ourselves into a definition of normal. They're not being selfish, they're being human! Of course, I love Lucius and Hermione together, so it's not like I'd complain about them cheating anyway :)
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  • From smmz79 on December 01, 2008
    way to go hermione finally doing something for your self... well this is not going to be good when it comes out in the open i just hope hermione and lucius can stick together and strengthen each other... i am sure they will be having some pretty interesting lunches it will be hard for them to be sooo close to each other but still have to put on an act if others happen to be around... ohhh and that day together that lucius was talking about sounds soooo yummy!! great job i can not wait for your update.. oh and i totally loved your one shot to lady blue eyes' challenge very cute
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  • From smmz79 on December 01, 2008
    woo hoo i guessed right one week... how sweet 'my soul's salvation' now isn't that just the sweetest... i doubt she will be able to run from her feelings now... hmm i wonder what ron is up to i am sure he is cheating on her but still??
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  • From smmz79 on December 01, 2008
    well i figured that it was only time for hermione to allow everything to sink in... but i am glad that lucius is making her face her feelings... so she can not run away and hide them.. so she is going to take some time to i give it a week before lucius pays her a visit and i can just imagine him following her and not allowing her to forget about him and what they feel with each other... yummy what a hot thought lucius coming to whisk her away.... she can only fight this for so long
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  • From carha on December 01, 2008
    Wow! thats the word that fits this chapter the best. Wow! Very intense chapter hun. I am glad that Hermione finally gave up. As always, you leave me begging for more more more!
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  • From TriniMinx on December 01, 2008
    Okay chpt. 17,


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  • From TriniMinx on December 01, 2008
    I just read chpt.16, Ron is such a jerk. grrr. Can she just whack him, divorce him and get it over with???
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  • From KellyJCR on December 01, 2008
    I knew she wouldn't be able to stay away (what women in her right mind would.). I am dying to find out what Ron has been up to. I do find it odd that she seems so isolated not just from Ron but from everyone in gerneral. After a year you would think that someone she was close with would try and reach out to her. Am I missing something? Lucius obviously gets his way I wonder how long he will be willing to keep it all a secret. I have a feeling that this "affair" will be a turning stone in their relationships with their spouses. Lucius will deffinatly want to leave Narcissa but, Hermione will have to rationalize her way through a breakup with Ron. I don't see that being a calm voyage. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on December 01, 2008
    I read your review reponse at the end of the chapter. I can see why you where drawned to write this story, its almost in a way for you to express your feelings for your cousin,(did I get that right.) and her baby. I really am enjoying this. Can't wait to see more clues as to where mr weasley is at all this time. Until next time.

    I wish I was her with lucius. I like their interaction together.
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  • From eileenmilner on December 01, 2008
    Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would willingly give way to Lucius. Problem is I have my own Slytherin,
    who was famous around Shrewsbury, and I have to conclude that he would not put up with me having
    a one nighter with Lucius. Therefore for my life, and Lucius's would be in danger (Ron was a commando marine)I will use my imagination, or pwp on fanfic.

    Hope you are all o.k. Best wishes for Christmas. Donavon aka Eileen, from Shropshire, England.

    Have a good Christmas for you and yours.

    Donavon.
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  • From Ithilwen on December 01, 2008
    Sorry I haven't reviewed lately, just recently had time to read and review all the fics I'm reading!
    But I have been reading all that you have posted and It's very emmotional what they are both going trought! Finding something between them that makes it worth living again. Not to mention hot too! So it's on now, but as she says It can't end well!

    And yes, like anyone could have said no to him.! I agree totally with you, Michael Caffee and Lucius make me squee aswell but Include Col. Tavington into that mix and you can really make me squee.. (And there you really have a jerk)
    Don't wonder about yourself, I'm right there with you, I do so too. But you can't help it with his characters *g*
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  • From smmz79 on December 01, 2008
    woo hoo and there it is the answer to all of that delicious sexual tension.... hmmm oh but he is sooo tempting!!!! great job
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