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Reviews for The Affair

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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on December 01, 2008
    This was beautifully done. I am enjoying this more and more and I love that your leading ladies are so honest and real. Don't concern yourself with loving the grade A jerks. I tend toward them in just about any movie, story, whatever just because they are vastly more interesting than the (usually) angst laden hero. Excellent work.
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on December 01, 2008
    It's strange that you say you don't focus on it when it's so much a part of the stories, much as electricity is part of any story set in modern times. It's simply there, like turning on the lights. That's what I ment when I said you had assimilated it so well, as if you actually used it yourself.
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  • From bournespeed on December 01, 2008
    That was hot and emotional all at the same time, it brought tears to my eyes. I am such a sap. Can't wait for more, let the games begin.
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  • From ANON - Rae on December 01, 2008
    I love this story :D

    I just wanted to also tell you about how realistic you make your stories, which is also what caught my eye to all your awesome fics. I love how you make Hermione a real person, not some drop dead gorgeous girl who sounds so fake, but someone that I can see in my head as a real person.

    Because of your amazing stories, I've gotten picky and cant read many others now So i just wanted to compliment you on that

    Keep writing
    ~Rae
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  • From smmz79 on November 30, 2008
    wooo what a chap.... so draco starts off kind of rough but that is to be expected, so i wonder if draco will be able to move past his opinions of hermione when he finds out that she is who makes him happy... and i just thought of something what is lucius going to do with that property he bought in dover??? maybe it would make a nice home for him and hermione or maybe a home for just hermione???
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  • From smmz79 on November 30, 2008
    wow what a hot steamy kiss you can feel the need for each other just radiating threw the chap!!! hmm i am not sure whether to think that ron is having an affair or he is just drowning his sorrows???
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  • From smmz79 on November 30, 2008
    oh wow what a chap..... so ron is burying his grief and thus driving a larger wedge between him and hermione and now hermione and lucius are admitting to their feelings... great chap!!!!
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  • From smmz79 on November 30, 2008
    nice chap wow lucius was really there for her when she needed someone to be.... great chap i really liked this one and it said sooo much
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  • From smmz79 on November 30, 2008
    oh my that was a great chap... hermione has given him the forgiveness that his should have given him... they are definitely opening up to each other and he was watching her from his office how sweet is he... i like the way he explains his change in personality and out look on life
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  • From ICKYintimidation on November 30, 2008
    i am loving this story!
    i'm a sucker for lucius being nasty and naughty... but the sweet side of lucius is awesome too, and you write it so well!
    it's easy to believe... i love the depth you add to the characters in each of your stories. even though each story is different, the characters stay in character, but you add another layer that is totally believable and relate-able (if that's a word...lol)
    oh! i have been inspired by your stories to draw a picture of lucius and hermione... and i wanted to share it with you... http://ickyintimidation.deviantart.com/art/love-thy-enemy-105003941
    i hope you like it, and i can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From on November 29, 2008
    I knew he couldn't stay away. :) Lovely gift, thoughtful... *sighs* What is going on with Ron and why is Harry not supporting both his friends? I'm not expecting an answer, just typing out loud. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - Letum on November 29, 2008
    Oooooh, it burns me up that Hermione lets Ron treat her like that. Lucius should steal her away and show her how a real man treats a woman. :P
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 29, 2008
    Chapter 12: Whew! Almost caught in the act
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 29, 2008
    Chapter 11: Sad events. It doesn
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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    oh so lucius and hermione are both humming it seems that their hearts are starting to feel a little lighter..... ok so this chap was partially in narcissas perspective and it was interesting to see how she feels about her relationship with lucius and what she feels is her role...
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