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Reviews for The Affair

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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    oh wow what a powerful chap... you definitely gave us a deeper glimpse into hermione and rons relationship...
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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    wow she they have become friends i think that she is burrowing her way into his heart.. by caring about the things that he loves... but she has no idea what she is doing and the impact that this will have on her...
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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    wow so they have opened up themselves to each other.. i like lucius in this very much... love the chap!!!
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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    yeahhh they are working together you can already see the connection between them it is small but it is there none the less... i think that they will come together because they are both lacking in the human contact department and that although they have made themselves seperated from those feelings they still need someone else to connect with
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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    oh my what a great second chap as well... we got a glimpse of lucius' life... how sad.... i just love him and he seems sooo defeated
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  • From smmz79 on November 29, 2008
    ok so i am joining you on this journey.... you are becoming one of my favorites i do love your stories!!! ok this first chap was tough but wow did it really express the different reactions to losing a child... great job....
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 29, 2008
    That was a lovely chapter with lucius remembering to get her a gift. Tipical ron, what a jerk. I am still wondering where he is going.

    can't wait for more.

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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on November 29, 2008
    I loved the watch and its little embellishments, what a perfect gift for him to give her. I'm also impressed at how perfectly you've assimilated the possibilities in a magic society and use them to create your subtext, but then I've always found your stories true to their internal logic. You always write the best Lumione's! Happy Holidays!
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  • From ANON - lala on November 29, 2008
    personally, the one factor i don't understand in this fic [or most other ron has an affair fics] is why harry doesn't tell her or why Hermione doesn't realize how wrong it is that he didn't tell her. being a friend IS about loyalty to both parties, but that loyalty only extends so far where you tell the guy 'hey, either you tell her or i will, you have a week' but he doesn't do that, he just sits there and makes faces.

    what a terrible friend, Hermione truly deserves better from both and i hope she finally realizes that... at least to knock some sense into harry over the true meaning of friendship and that it means more than just loyalty to the weasleys.
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  • From KellyJCR on November 29, 2008
    That was close. Lucis must always have his way. That was the second time he held on to Hermione when he knew they could be found out. I wonder if he intends to "accidentally" let Ron know whats going on. In any case I love the watch you had him give her. I have never heard of a gift that romantic in any story before. You do have the best imagination. Love that you have a Remus story finished he doesn't get enough stories and is usually overlooked. Looking forward to more. Well done!!!
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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 28, 2008
    Totally awsome, I still can't wait to findout what is up with Ron. The moment with them together was so beautiful.

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  • From KellyJCR on November 28, 2008
    Thank you, the torture is over. I have to say if I were Hermione I would feel guilty to. I think Lucius has resigned himself to the fact that although he is married technically he not in a marriage. Hermione I feel will take some time to figure this out. Now that they have slept together it will be impossible to keep them apart . When Ron finally does surface I think there are going to be quit a few fireworks. You have managed to capture the feelings of everyone so beautifully. When they finally made love it was heartbreaking and sensual all at the same time. Absolutly can't wait for more, Although I will. Well done!!!
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 28, 2008
    Chapter 10: One kiss. First step down the slippery slope. Ron is actually worse off than Hermione over the death of his son. It wasn
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  • From TriniMinx on November 28, 2008
    Oooh, Ron is so infuriating and he hasn't even been in the past two or three chapters! What do you mean he hasn't been home in three days? Ah ha! I bet the good-for-nothing is shacking up with Lavender!

    Grrr.

    Happy Black Friday! :o)
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  • From ANON - Ashley on November 27, 2008
    *has a huge grin on her face* okay so i understand the whole break and what not but it was still sweet! I've needed that after this past week! lol
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