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Reviews for The Affair

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From carha on November 27, 2008
    A great way to end a fun holiday. I hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving. ( I am not really sure if you are American and celebrate it but...) I am feeling better now thank you. Finally some smut! Great chapters hun, I feel bad that Hermione feels guilty. I am seriously beginning to wonder what Ron has been up to all this time. But you never dissapoint and I am sure you will eventually say. Looking forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - nightqueen on November 27, 2008
    OMG you know how to make a holiday complete!! These were two of the most incredible chapters ever. The emotional intesity was breath taking. The scene before the fire was raw, emotional and deeply erotic. thank you for the gift. It's emotionally draining to watch them both suffer together and a part. I can't wait for more.
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  • From on November 27, 2008
    Intense and emotionally draining (in a good way...) Brilliantly done. Thanks.
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  • From jessirose85 on November 27, 2008
    I loved the smut xxxxx

    I was crying when Hermione started to feel guilty....poor Mione

    I think maybe she should confront Ron or tell Ron the truth and divorce him xxx

    Beautiful ch 14 and 15
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  • From ANON - Linneh on November 27, 2008
    Incredible! :) I hope Hermione is going to find out what Ron's doing all the time. I'm really curious! Good job!
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on November 27, 2008
    Excellent chapters! And well worth the wait. Don't know if you are American, but Happy Thanksgiving; coming home to find this made dinner with the relatives worth it. I love Lucius when he's all hot and sweaty. Draco can be as immature as he likes, but I hope he's not going to do something dumb and hurt her, is he? Although Narcissa might be allowed to have a go even if it would be mostly from wounded pride.
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on November 27, 2008
    I guess that's the best thing to do. It's sad that so many people forget that they were once deeply in Love, and even if that's not the case anymore, there usually have been good reasons!

    They finally did it! It was unavoidable, just as it was unavoidable that Hermione would feel bad about cheating afterwards. I think Lucius is further down the road, than Hermione is. After all Narcissa has been distancing herself from him for a longer time and for a lesser reason than Ron. I guess that makes it easier not to feel guilty about what happened.

    And although I understand why Hermione feels guilty, she shouldn't... At least not if Ron's really cheating at her. There is no reason to be true to somebody who doesn't honour her in the same way!

    Lovely update... I LOVE lemons...
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  • From rosebud360 on November 27, 2008
    Selfishly, I was more than ready for your tasty hot lemonade. It was was needy, and explosive and so good. But at what cost? The magic of the heart in her palm was inspired. I love the way you use it to communicate their emotions. Right now the feelings they are receiving are of caring and love, but will it also be an indicator of the other's pain and/or anger? So, I'm ready for the next chapter now. I think the mine field has just been triggered hasn't it.
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  • From bournespeed on November 27, 2008
    lovely smut, you do make my imagination go wild. Unfortunately there will always be guilt, its the way we woman are made I'm sure, most men I've come across don't seem to suffer with their conscience quite as much as us.
    Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - SM on November 27, 2008
    I've read several of your stories, but I don't think I've enjoyed them as much as this one...and the others have been great! You really capture the depth of the emotions of these two main characters, and I've liked the slow progression out of their loneliness to each other. I especially like that you give them consciences and don't have them fall into bed and live "happily ever after" as in many other stories. You're a very talented writer!
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  • From ANON - Letum on November 27, 2008
    Alright, I figure it's about time I stopped lurking and finally tell you how amazing your story is. I think that the topics covered in it hit close to home for many people, myself included. You write beautifully and I cannot wait to see where this goes. :) Please post again soon!
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  • From Cliobella on November 27, 2008
    OH! I am becoming so wrapped up in this. The heartbreak and longing they are feeling; I have never cried like this over a fanfic. Hubby keeps wondering why his handkerchiefs are disappearing from his drawer. I could never understand or condone cheating before, having had an ex who was fond of the pastime; but this is so different. This isn
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  • From vintagejgc on November 27, 2008
    I always love your stories, this one is especially fantastic, the taboo adds an extra edge. I am looking forward to finding out what Ronniekins has been up to.
    Different note, as much as I love what you can do with the naughty Slytherins, I can't wait to read the new Remus story you've mentioned. Happy Thanksgiving! I am thankful for these hot, hot chapters to start my day!!
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  • From ANON - doodle on November 27, 2008
    Your writing is how I wish I could write. I did not want to read this. Good friends with slim ball cheating husbands made me leary. I am glad I clicked and read. Your note to a reviewer about the war changing people hit so close to home. My neighbor is back from his tour but the man I knew is gone.
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  • From sassenach on November 27, 2008
    Thanks for the Thanksgiving present - another set of great chapters!
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