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Reviews for The Affair

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  • From CarlaRush on November 27, 2008
    Heart felt and wonderful...great job in making it believable!
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  • From Gertie on November 27, 2008
    Horray for chapters that go together and double horray for smut. Have a lovely holiday!
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  • From margaritama on November 27, 2008
    Hermione should follow Ron and confirm his affair...I suspected it. He can't move on past his son's death and grieve with his wife so they'll never be happy. Lucius' sadness is so deep and Narcissa is a manipulative, evil bitch.
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  • From astsweetheart18 on November 26, 2008
    such a wonderful story! i cannot wait to read more of it.

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  • From on November 26, 2008
    Brilliant. Clever of Lucius to mark Hermione. It was interesting reading their reactions. I can only guess (and probably wrongly) as to what Dear Ron is up to. Personally I think he's gay (but then again, I'm pretty sure my husband is gay too and no one else believes me....tmi, I know).

    Thank you and happy thanks giving to you, too. Mine was in October - Canadian here :)
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  • From ANON - Steph on November 25, 2008
    Ohh, now it gets interesting...lol! Im loving this story Goddess. Its funny because despite your fear of us hating this story and the characters for having an affair, I just want them to get together. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From TriniMinx on November 25, 2008
    Ooh, a secret, not so secret, meeting in the library! hehehe

    I think Ron is having an affair too...with Lavander. Is he?

    You know, I gotta tell you, I'm glad that you're really descriptive with your stories. I can picture exactly what you're writing as I read. Like when you say Lucius was barefoot, in trousers and white shirt, stalking around. I mean, as I read it, I pictured it. A lot of authors, even the published ones, don't do that. For me it's really enjoyable.

    30 chapters? Okay, cool. Sounds good. What's the new story you're working on? I mean what "ship" is it?

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  • From MementoxMori on November 25, 2008
    First of all, I absolutely love your Lucius. Secondly, I wish they would have sex already. The tension between them is nearing it's breaking point and even I am starting to feel frustrated! lol This is a great story, I can't wait for more!
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  • From voraciousreader on November 25, 2008
    Very erotic. Waiting for more!
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  • From LadyofClunn on November 25, 2008
    Now, that was just ... *fans self* ... just hot!

    It's definitely looking up!

    A relationship involves a lot of effort and when one part of the couple is just not putting any effort in, the other one will burn out soon. So I say: Ron and Narcissa have at least partly brought this on themselves. Ditch them! (And give me more of this wonderful smut - what? No, no, I am not egoistic...)
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  • From ANON - Lady Disdain on November 25, 2008
    Lovely again! I so like this story :) I'm sorry to hear you've got an infection,. get well soon!
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  • From bournespeed on November 25, 2008
    its a good job it's freezing cold down here, need to go outside and cool off!! Fantastic loving it
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  • From KellyJCR on November 25, 2008
    Woof! That was just hot! I was surprised that the Weaslys didn't question the actions of Ron and Hermione. Is it because thay have always been this way since the baby or has the family just decided to let them work things out on their own. I can actually see how despratly Lucius wants Hermione. I actually felt pain when he was pleading with her to acknowledge that she too thought of him when they were apart. I am not a very soft or emtional person ( my mom actually asked me if I felt any once.) but this story is making me ache in a way that a story never has. Its a little disconcerning in a good way I think. Hope you have a good holiday. Well done!!!
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  • From happybunny on November 25, 2008
    Great chapter! When are we going to find out what Ron has been up to?
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on November 25, 2008
    You have my deepest and most sincere sympathies, sinus infections are never fun. You play out the struggle in Hermione's mind very well. Excellent read.
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