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  • From emo44 on November 11, 2023

    They seriously need to stop fighting it. Their marriages are over. Lucius' because Narcissa is a spiteful bitch and Hermione's because Ron cant face reality and is a lying drunk and possible cheater.


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  • From emo44 on November 11, 2023

    I really really don't like this Narcissa. Using her son to try to get her way, disgusting. My siblings and I were and occasionally still are used as pawns by our parents. (Who been divorced for 35 years) Not still, we all set clear boundaries, not that they respect them. So when boundaries are broken we ignore them, give them a time-out. Like naughty children. Narcissa needs a time-out, Lucius should cut her off completely.


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  • From emo44 on November 11, 2023

    Now I'm not sure Ron is having an affair, maybe with the bottle. Lucius should look into it anyways. Relationships do run there course, people mature or not and you can't go back in time, all you have is what's in front of you. Lucius and Hermione are slowly, painfully slowly starting to cross the line. I think they both have old lines that need severing. Narcissa I don't get in this story, other than being a greedy bitch, Lucius is her bank after all and nothing more. 


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  • From emo44 on November 11, 2023

    The first kiss...


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  • From emo44 on November 11, 2023

    It's sad that nobody else just sat and listened to Hermione. Glad Lucius and Hermione do that for eah other.


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  • From emo44 on November 10, 2023

    It really seems that Ron has moved on to another or he's curled up with his mommy. Sorry, I just don't like Ron, or Ron and Hermione together. They can be friends but at times I don't get that either. In cannon he was a bad friend and never apologized that I can remember, to Harry as well.

    I have started to love Lucius and Hermione stories, and Snape and Hermione. Still my favorite is Draco and Hermione.

    I'm really enjoying your story.


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  • From emo44 on November 10, 2023

    I can see why Hermione turned Ron away, they have had no emotional connection in a year. Husband or not. They went through a great loss, he turned to his mother (typical Ron) when he should have turned to Hermione. Hermione should have turned to Ron but was probably blaming and second guessing everything she had done during the pregnancy. Everyone avoiding the topic of Oliver, is just awful. He was a full term baby, there was a funeral, it all happened. Just because it's upsetting doesn't mean you can avoid it. I have a feeling and I may be wrong but I think Ron blames Hermione. I guess I will wait and see if you address it.


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  • From emo44 on November 10, 2023

    What a start to the story.  I'm intrigued. 


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  • From Alcoholic_Rootbeer on April 30, 2019

    Hello! We at Granger Enchanted Survivors 18+ wish you well and hope we’re about to make your day just a little brighter. Earlier this month, you were nominated, pushed through the semi-finals and made it all the way to the finals of the 2019 Enchanted Awards. Well, we’ve rounded up all the votes, and you are either a winner or runner up in the following categories:

    RUNNER UP: "The Affair" - Summer Lovin' Award (Best Love Story)

    CONGRATS! We’re so happy for you! We’ve made banners just for our winners/runner ups, and would love for you to share any you recieve on your social media platforms! If you’ve made it this far, it means you’re going into our TRIWIZARD TOURNAMENT, where the winners and runner ups of the previous years will go head to head. More info about that will be coming up later this year, so be on the lookout!

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  • From Alcoholic_Rootbeer on April 17, 2019

    Hello! My name is Amy, and I’m from the facebook group Granger Enchanted Survivors 18+. This year marks our third Enchanted Awards (A Hermione-fanfiction celebration!). We’re pleased to announce one or more of your fanfictions have been nominated and made it past the semi-finals, to our final showcase!

    "The Affair" - Summer Lovin' Award (Best Love Story)

    We’d love for you to share the banners we have made as well as the link for voting with your readers! Voting begins April 17th, 2019 and ends April 27th at 11:59PM CST. Winners will be announced April 30th! If you aren’t a part of the Granger Enchanted group and would like to be, look us up on Facebook (be sure to provide a date of birth to confirm you are eighteen years or older).

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  • From ymaxwell39 on January 26, 2018

    I've read quite a few love scenes over the years, in everything from Harlequin romance novels to fanfiction. I have to say, the love scene I just read was one of the top three I have ever read. Brilliantly done!


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  • From ANON - desiree on August 26, 2014
    I am very late, but I just came across this story and have to tell you it is absolutely beautiful! You ma'am have a way with words! Thank you for sharing your gift.
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  • From ANON - PhoenixCG on October 25, 2011
    Another great tale, as usual. I love your writing style, I can't believe it took me so long to read this! I hope you publish something new soon!
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  • From Lizski on May 29, 2010
    Awesome! I am so glad that there was a happy ending for the two of them - you had me nervous for a while! ;-) Great, as always!
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  • From ANON - Tina Ferguson on January 31, 2010
    I love all of your stories. I have avoided this one due to the subject. It was hitting a little close to home. I finally broke down and read it and I really enjoyed it. I really do love your Lucius. Please write some more soon.
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