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Reviews for The Affair

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  • From ginnylovesharry07 on November 25, 2008
    can't wait to seen what is up with ron. I like how draco was compassionent towards lucius at the end of the chapter. he is not such a jerk after all, I bet he was just surprised seeing granger talking to his father so informally.
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on November 24, 2008
    I read all of this in one shot because it is superb. I sincerely hope you will continue with it.
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  • From Gertie on November 24, 2008
    Yes, Draco is a bit of a twat but I hope he gets better. He seems like he could be. I don't know why but a very naive part of me just wants everyone to be happy in this story.
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  • From rosebud360 on November 24, 2008
    This story is so beautiful. I cry for their pain, and celebrate each victory. Every chapter I find another damaged layer peeled away and they heal just a bit more. I'm really happy to see that Lucius and Draco aren't as estranged as I originally thought. I'm afraid I'm not very good at reviews (I worry that I may sound insincere), but I think that this story may be one of your best. I'm also greedy, I'm eagerly looking forward to your Remus story. I hope you and your family enjoy a good Thanksgiving.
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  • From on November 24, 2008
    Oh my, two brilliant chapters. I liked Draco, he seemed genuine...if that's that right choice of words. Hermione tormented (I can relate to some extent) is beautifully painful to read. Thanks for the double update.

    Your comment to me made me smile. You know how sometimes a wondefully written piece of fan fiction can speak to you on such a real level that it's unnerving? That would be this story. Thanks again! Read ya Tuesday. :)
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  • From ANON - B on November 24, 2008
    So, I've been in bed sick all weekend and I just finished reading ALL of the stories you have posted. I kid you not. You're are simply amazing and I think this story might be my favorite yet. Keep up the amazing work, I'm looking forward to reading more!
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  • From tambrathegreat on November 23, 2008
    Good job on both the chapers. I really enjoyed the kiss. It was sweet, not at all tawdry. I feel so sorry for all of the people involved, even Narcissa.

    If Ron is having an affair, he's stupid.
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  • From carha on November 23, 2008
    Whoohoo! Two whole chapters in a day! I was very excited to see that. Wouldn't it be funny if Draco realized everything before everyone else? You are right, he does start as a prat, but I will wait to see if he stays that way. He's a softie in there somewhere.
    So Narcissa finally starts to suspect something, and Hermione suspects the same of her husband. Ron really is an idiot. I can honestly say I dont't like him, Harry, or Ginny in this story so far.
    Looking forward to your next update!

    (And I know that my review is a little hard to follow, I caught the flu, so my mind is a little out there right now, so sorry if it doesn't make sense)
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  • From sassenach on November 23, 2008
    Another great update! Thanks! Yeah, I liked the movie (I'm pretty sure it had a lot to do with Rob Pattinson, lol) but I chose to view it as a supplement to the book rather than a alternative or a replacement. Oh well, at least the Half-Blood Prince trailer looks amazing! Also, did you ever say how many chapters this story is going to be? Thanks.
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  • From eileenmilner on November 23, 2008
    Hi, still really enjoying the depth you have put into the storyline. You're Lucius is so compled, yet,
    open like I have never read before.

    I loved the way he openly explained his relationship with Narcissa. The kiss right after, was acknowledging that he knew he was beginning to feel deep for Hermione.

    I also think, that although she is trying to fight their attraction, part of her just wants to give in and be loved. I feel so sorry for her.

    You have to feel for Draco, fancy his mother going into detail like that to a grown up son. I seriously think that Narcissa is in need of treatment. After all she is blaming anyone but herself.

    Beautifully written, looking forward to more. Best wishes, Donavon
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  • From ANON - Linneh on November 23, 2008
    OMGZ you wrote such a beautiful fanfiction! I love it! Especially the way you portraited Lucius and Hermione., as broken people, I like your Lucius,. he's so human, and still Slytherin! Wonderful job and update soon!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on November 23, 2008
    Ok, so Draco is a twat but still....I love him.

    Urgh, Frosty the snow bitch has a cheek, a mistress? My Lucius would never be that crass. Crazy bitch. Maybe if she wasn't a frigid snob with a stick up her arse, she'd see the man she has before her.

    Poor 'Mione, I will rip his burning bushed freckled pecker off if he is doing the dirty. I hate him.

    I loved the kiss, god it gives me chills to read this story.

    I love it!

    Much love,

    Vic x
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on November 23, 2008
    Nasty Draco! Come to Liverpool at one, Mistress Vicky is waiting with her whip, your pale behind needs a good spanking. You will pay for your insolence, while bent over Mistress's knee. LMAO
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  • From LadyofClunn on November 23, 2008
    Somebody should smack Draco on the head, but then, I think he was a bit upset about being used as his mother's personal owl. So, he wants his father to be happy, huh? Dark times are approaching for Narcissa, and I find myself not caring at all.
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  • From Tenar10r on November 23, 2008
    WOnderful fic, I can hardly wait for more.
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