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Reviews for The Affair

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From eileenmilner on November 17, 2008
    I lost six babies before giving birth to my beautiful daughter. You described my feelings exactly, in the way you wrote Hermione's pain. Luckily I had a wonderful husband who grieved with me.

    Even though I had a lump in my throat I thoroughly enjoyed (as per usual)the opening 5 chapters. Will be checking every day for the eagerly awaited update.

    Best wishes,
    Donavon.
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  • From bournespeed on November 17, 2008
    Oh you weren't wrong almost needed tissues for chapter 4, that was a very moving dialogue. Having been anticipating this story since you described it before. Can already feel the love and angst radiating from them. Can't wait for more. As ever thank you for feeding my addiction.
    Lu
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  • From jenlaranja on November 17, 2008
    I'm soooo happy to be reading a new Lucis/hermione fic!
    I hope you explain further in another chapter the reason of Oliver's death, or is it going to stay a mistery?
    And I have to say, I hate Ron and Narcissa!

    I hate to say this, but i noticed a mistake in chapter 4, I think. Where Lucius asks Hermione how old the baby would have been, you wrote a week, but hasn't it been a year already? Well, just thought you should know!

    I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter! Keep up the good work ;) lol
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  • From gtbioteach on November 16, 2008
    I will admit it - I almost had to stop reading at chapter 1. I, too, lost a baby very late. What I have learned is that loss is a part of me and has made me the person I today. While I still think of that baby, I have moved on. Thank you for tackling a very difficult subject. It is hard on relationships all the way around. If one more person gave me the look that Hermione described - ugh!!!
    Now, on to the story! I like this Lucius a lot. I also want to smack Narcissa for being...Well, just for being.
    I do belive that relationships built on friendship are wonderful because of the strong foundation. Can't wait to watch this one build.

    As always, thank you for writing and sharing.
    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Cliobella on November 16, 2008
    OK. Weepy now. Really, weepy; Hubby keeps asking what he did wrong! Beautifully written as always; I
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  • From crssmnc on November 16, 2008
    Oh I love this. I have been anticipating it since you mentioned it would be coming soon. I check my favorite ships each morning hoping for an update to any stories I get attached to. Well this will be the first one I check from now until it is finished. Bless you for writing such tasty things for me to read.
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  • From ANON - sassenach on November 16, 2008
    I'm loving this story so far. I love the way you've begun to set up the plot. Also, having read almost all of your stories, I believe that this is some of your best writing yet! Can't wait for the next update! Oh, and how many chapters will there be?
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  • From ANON - Nightqueen on November 16, 2008
    Once again you have begun a tale that has captured my interest. You always choose your words with such care. You can feel the pain and loss rolling off Lucius and Hermione and see the budding friendship developing. I know the subject material might bother many, but it seems that both marriages have stopped being partnerships. Four people going through the motions of living they have stopped seeing each other and only see themselves and their hurt. Hermione taking this job has opened her eyes and Lucius accepting her help has pulled him out of his own misery. I can't wait to see where this journey takes me as a reader I have my tissues at the ready!
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  • From ElvisJesse on November 16, 2008
    hmmm... I am very interested so far. I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
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  • From wishywashy on November 16, 2008
    i love this. another great fic.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on November 16, 2008
    You're back! And this story so far is fab. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From voraciousreader on November 16, 2008
    Just beautiful. I have always envied the way you evoke your character's emotions, and not just in the erotic scenes. You give them depth, which makes them far better than my own poor attempts. More, please, whenever you are ready!
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  • From jaimelee on November 16, 2008
    Interesting start... I can't wait to see the rest of it.
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  • From LuciTM on November 16, 2008
    Sorry for sending the last review multiple times.
    My interwebs started acting up and I hit the review button about a bazillion times to try to get it to submit.
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  • From LuciTM on November 16, 2008
    @ chapter five.


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