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Reviews for The Affair

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From eileenmilner on December 11, 2008
    Snapes-Goddess, Its Christmas, you cannot leave us, your loyal readers waiting for their meeting like this, please I am begging, up date soon.

    The story is simply brilliant!!!!!

    Reviewing is hard for me at the moment, so if I don't review again have a good Christmas for you and your family.

    Best wishes, Donavon.
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  • From carha on December 11, 2008
    Yay a little bit of happiness amidst all this gloom and doom lately. Can't wait to see the next chapter hun!
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  • From ANON - kayleigh on December 11, 2008
    Goodness Gracious! You are such a tease! Not fair!
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  • From rox4787 on December 11, 2008
    i hate you did you have to stop right there love it please please please please please please please please update soon please cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - ROSEBUD on December 11, 2008
    Oh Lord, when he grabbed her and pulled her into the alley my breath left me. Their kiss was frantic and needy, and oh so beautiful. I had no doubt that you would get them back together. They belong together. I hate to wish my life away, but I can't wait for "tomorrow".
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  • From Citten on December 11, 2008
    no (thanking all that is holy!) but now i am so wanting the next chapter! dear harry! :) he is a wonderful friend. i think even ron as much as he loves her would rather see her happy than wasting away. :) thouagh i do feel really sorry for the guy but he did bring it upon himself. though i forgot last time being so distraught about 'our couple' the i forgot to tell you what a peice of work narcissa is boy i really hate her! do something about that woman, please!!!!! :) post soon, really soon PLEASE! :)
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  • From OrgyXIIIBike on December 11, 2008
    I thought that you would keep them away from each other for a few chapters. I always love your stories, always read them, and when you commented on my oneshot, I was thrilled to have such a great writer comment on it and say that it was great. They were newlyweds, just in case you are still curious on that.
    Anyway keep up the great writing, I wish I could have great ideas like that for a story. But I'll be sticking to one shots as they pop up on me like a surprise party.... SURPRISE!
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  • From CarlaRush on December 11, 2008
    Great chapter, but in my humble opinian we need a set of respective divorces. There doesn't seem to be a way to salvage either marriage.
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  • From ANON - Liltinybee on December 11, 2008
    How is it that I've only discovered you now?? Your stories are nothing short of amazing. You really are a very good story teller. I'm liking many of the pairings you write but was relatively new to Lumione. Damn, they're hot together. You've left this chapter on a cliffie *grumble*. I hope to read more soon! I hope Narcissa doesn't make too much trouble for them but I'm sure she will! I also adore Love Thy Enemy and read it twice since Tues! Hope to read more soon!

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  • From smmz79 on December 11, 2008
    yeahhhh i was hoping that you would get them together!!!!! oh yeah come on tomm.... great chap!!!!! you are a genius as always i knew hermione would try to keep her promise at first it is the gryffindor in her
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on December 11, 2008
    Poor Hermione! I could practically see her heart break into a million pieces. Excellent chapter. I can't wait for more.
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  • From KellyJCR on December 11, 2008
    Well of course you wouldn't keep them apart but, I think its going to get pretty hairy. Hermione seems to be caught in the middle of a difficult battle. Stay with Ron who she is married to or go with Lucius who she is in love with. What to do? I get the feeling that Lucius has got the answer and a plan. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!
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  • From Ithilwen on December 11, 2008
    Finishing the last chappie, one thought came to me.

    They are not going to elope are they? "Tomorrow will change everything!"

    But the two before were so sad, I could just dispose of Narcissa. She lives to cause him pain, even when he's tried for 10 years to make ammends..

    And Ron, well I can understand his hurt. But he was not there for her even if he was suffering just as much as she did. But they should have talked to eachother atleast. And it might not have come to the affair.
    And I just can't see Hermione and Ron together.. A smart witch like her and him. Doesn't make sense in my book lol.
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  • From ANON - ginnyginny on December 10, 2008
    poor hermione... giving up her chance at happiness due to guilt and a feeling of obligation to ron. i feel bad for ron too, for he helped create the need within hermione that lucius seemed to fill. i feel terrible for lucius as well... now stuck in a marriage to a woman who will remind him every day of the love and potential life that he lost. i don't feel much towards narcissa, except contempt... hopefully she will leave him. maybe draco will intercede and help get hermione and lucius together, seeing his father in such despair. looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From Citten on December 10, 2008
    ONLY 7!?!?! that cant be possible! i will just know i will want more! (i always do though.) well two things then one-i do hope that you will be posting and soon! two-if only 7 chapters to go, do you have a sequel planned? :)
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