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Reviews for The Affair

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  • From ANON - desiraes0220 on December 10, 2008
    my god your stories are great and very well thought out. I cant wait for more update again soon please
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  • From sassenach on December 10, 2008
    wow. you really know how to make a girl reach for the tissues... I know, I know, you warned us, but it's still sad. I just hope it all ends well.
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  • From smmz79 on December 09, 2008
    omg what in the hell she really is very vindictive.... wow great chap... can not wait to see what happens next
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  • From smmz79 on December 09, 2008
    oh wow what a chap... i can not believe that it happened like this.... what in the world is going to happen i doubt lucius will give up on her or allow her to do this wow while she was holding ron her heart was breaking for lucius...
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  • From CarlaRush on December 09, 2008
    Boy, you certainly painted Cissy as a vindictive bitch. However I can certainly see why Lucius fell out of love with her.
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  • From jessirose85 on December 09, 2008
    so its out in the open xxxx

    I'd say the next few chapters maybe angsty xxxx

    great writing
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  • From on December 09, 2008
    Narcissa the bitch - that IS her title, right? I guess I feel a little, tiny bit sorry for Ron. I know depression can alienate you from others, but can you really expect them to never move on? I know I'm a Hermione/Malfoy girl & I am just not that capable of feeling sorry for Ron... Is that bad? I'm agonizingly waiting for your next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - foreverBlack21 on December 09, 2008
    Stunning chapter, really! Very surprised about the interaction between Lucius and Narcissa.
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  • From ANON - Voracious reader on December 09, 2008
    Now those were a couple of volatile encounters! Well written and in character, too! Narcissa has gotten sloppy, hasn't she? She's told Lucius her intentions in a moment of pique, and he knows her very well. I think they are both in for a bumpy ride, and no, I don't for a moment believe the affair is truly over. At least Ron accepts that it is partly his own fault.
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  • From bournespeed on December 09, 2008
    wow that was an abrupt turn into the pits of hell. Think I felt all Hermione's emotions then, she is in denial big time. Very well written as always, please, please, can we have a happy ending.........Narcissa falling down the stairs and Ron eaten by a dragon, maybe...lol??
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  • From gtbioteach on December 09, 2008
    Wow. Oh, wow. That was good.
    I did feel somewhat sorry for Ron. He is no angel, but he is hurting.
    I want to slap Narcissa across her smug face. To get joy out of someone else's pain. That's just being a bitch.

    Now, even though I feel sorry for Ron, I know (or at least hope) that Hermione will find her way back into Lucius' arms. I just don't see her staying away.

    As always, thanks for writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From MariaTeresaQuintanar on December 09, 2008
    Ouch! First Ron demanding that she never see Lucius (totally understanding given what's going on), but then Narcissa...I knew that woman would have issues (just look at who her sister is after all), but that was even beyond what I thought she would be like. Great job and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on December 09, 2008
    What a bitch! Why am I not surprised? Ron's different... I can feel for him, even if he has played his part in all of this.

    It's so sad that there's always somebody who'll end up hurt when such things happen. I'd rather see everybody happy :-( I am such a sissy!

    Goodness, I can't wait to know how you will sort that out! It's gonna be difficult...
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2008
    man she's a bitch
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  • From carinthea on December 09, 2008
    I never in a thousand years thought that there would come a time I would feel sorry for Lucius, but it's happened. I wanted to slap Narcissa. And Ron, emotional blackmail and she's falling for it. Guilt does make you do stupid things sometimes.
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