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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From voraciousreader on June 05, 2009
    At least she didn't vomit on him, LOL. Loved him zapping the muggle and then the barstaff tossing him out! Did you know that penile shaped baked goods were part of the women's mysteries in the cults pf Kore and Demeter in ancient greece? Also for some groups dedicated to Bacchus. See what a liberal arts education can do for you? (sheepish grin)
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  • From rini868 on June 05, 2009
    Christev told me that I would be really excited about this chapter, so here I go :)

    I am loving the baked goods ;D

    Wouldn
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  • From Darkless on June 05, 2009
    Woohooo! Let's hear it for the solace of alcohol!

    At least they had a good time. Hehehe
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  • From Clairvoyant on June 05, 2009
    Another great one, AV. Did she know that was Severus at the bar, or did her alcohol-addled brain just call the wizard-disguised-as-a-Muggle Severus? She didn't remember her return home from the bar with him.

    I'm happy the happy ending is near, but sad to see your smart, thoughtful, funny story end. Of course there is more to come from the imagination Apollina V.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 05, 2009
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more. I hope that Severus and Hermione will get back together soon.
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  • From Given2Fly on June 05, 2009
    Is Hermione going to realize that Severus is in the house sometime soon? It will be interesting to see how you have that happen; whether Severus will show himself to her, be found accidentally or intentionally...can't wait!

    Lovely update and again, I adore you guys!
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  • From katiekrm on June 05, 2009
    Jake is so hilarious. I wish I had a roommate who could bake penis cakes. Sweet Severus taking care of Hermione. Now that he's gotten his act together, I am sure he will make a wonderful husband. I love how he hexed those men off her.
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  • From neelix on June 05, 2009
    At least Severus knows with certainty that she loves him. I loved this chapter... and what a hero he was, rescuing her from herself!
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  • From liagiba84 on June 04, 2009
    Well, now that I'm 58 chapters into this story, I figured I'd better get off my butt and register for this site so I could review your story! I have been enthralled by this story since you first published it. You are such a talented writer, and I have fallen in love with your characters, and I wait (rather impatiently)for your new chapters. Thank you:)
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  • From ladyjessamen on June 04, 2009
    Sweet Moses! Been there, done that, passed on the T-shirt (well sort of). Once again lots of good writing and a true feeling for the flow of a good narration, excellent charactarization and an excellent portrayal of what could be anyone's story (minus the magic naturally). I've said it before nad I'll say it again you're a natural at this and I look forward to finishing this and reading whatever you choose to write next. You've got real talent and I'm jealous.
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  • From alina290 on June 04, 2009
    The hero is Severus here. Good chapter. It reminded me of the movie "The Wedding Date", wish I could get drunk like that. I have not done that in a good while. Keep up the good work.
    Liz
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  • From Robs on June 04, 2009
    Brilliant chapter, as usual! Will she remember anything of the previous night I wonder? Jake, bless him, does everything for her. I love him! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Given2Fly on June 02, 2009
    You're brilliant, did you know?

    Honestly, when I found this fic I was somewhat leary of reading it. I'll admit to being a die hard 'Ms_Figg' fan. I enjoy reading Hermione paired with just about anyone, but when it comes to HG/SS pairings, she's the author I always go to. It was by sheer accident I came upon this story and once I started reading, I couldn't stop.

    I have a 5 month old daughter who had to be entertained by her daddy Saturday - yesterday because I couldn't stop reading! It's nice to see someone actually build up to a real storyline. Don't get me wrong, I love a good PWP just as much as the next gal. But it's nice to read a real story with HG/SS as the main pairing. Severus in this fic is priceless; just enough vulnerability to let the reader know that he's human without losing his snarkiness and innate Slytherin qualities.

    I must admit the Hermione you've created is one I enjoy seeing. The 'I-am-woman-hear-me-roar' thing just works for her. This is how I invisioned her being after the war. Something of a bitchy hardass, with a chip on her shoulder big enough to feed Great Britain and half of France. Severus' theory on God, penance, punishments, the seven levels of hell, purgatory and the like are at times difficult to follow, but it all reverts back to the theory most authors (myself included)seem to subscribed to: that wizards and witches worship either Merlin or the Greek and Roman Gods.

    Your description of Azkaban and Billy Mulciber's family absolutely jerked my heartstrings. And showing Hermione's insight into that trauma, that horrific existance was genius. It allowed us to see the more feminine, soft hearted side to her. It never ceases to amaze her now, what the human heart can endure.

    Severus' singularly emotional, diseased soul practically rotting away when Hermione filed for divorce only served to endear him to me even more, seeing 'first hand' if you will, a miniscule grain of what he must have felt when Lily turned her back on him all those years ago.

    I LOVE Jake! My best friend is just like him, albeit gay. I'm not certain if Jake is or not, although it seems implied. His one liners cracked me up these last few chapters and I look forward to reading even more from him.

    WELL DONE!!!!! Honestly, you write beautifully, it's easy to become lost in your tales and put yourself in the characters shoes. I eagerly await the next update and you can't post it too fast for me! Keep up the great work, UBER kudos to your beta and I look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From on June 02, 2009
    I want to slap Hermione silly. Or just grab her around the neck and say "SMARTEN UP."
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on May 31, 2009
    Very nice, very nice! You are as always... GENIUS!
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