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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From rini868 on April 10, 2009
    Candy flavours
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  • From alina290 on April 10, 2009
    An emotional roller-coaster. This chapter has me in tears. Some of the other chapters have sort of done it a little, but not as much as this one. Your portrayal of Severus is so in tune to his way of being. You have really captured him to the T in my mind. I have read others and this one is the one that both makes him so cruel, but at the same time with a heart. Thank you so much for this chapter. I do not think I can say anymore, I keep on bawling my eyes out and it hurts so much to see both of them hurting so much. One thing about true love, it always hurts no matter what.
    Liz
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  • From chyara on April 09, 2009
    i had to re-read this chapter 3 times...
    I wouldn't be surprised if Hermione went off the wagon and used that happy potion again...

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  • From chyara on April 09, 2009
    My goodness! My chest was tight with sadness with the last chapter.
    Please update soon, it's been too long.
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  • From Heidi191976 on April 09, 2009
    This was a wonderful, yet sad chapter. I hope that Severus will realize that Hermione is never coming back unless he apologizes and agrees to go home with her. I think it will take seeing the papers for their divorce to make him see that he really hurt her this time. Saying the things he did showed that he is cruel, but I believe that he truly loves her no matter what he says. I look forward to reading the next chapter to see what happens.
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  • From mageemi on April 09, 2009
    OMFG!!! This was brilliant, horribly, tear jerkingly, heart breakingly brilliant. His cruelty cut like a knife and afterwards he seems oblivious. As if she should have know he didn't really mean he didn't want her to come back, she should have just known that, right? What a typical male idiot. Hope you have more up soon, but as someone else said I hope she doesn't just forgive him and take him back, he needs to earn it. I love your writing. :)
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  • From anncee on April 09, 2009
    oh holy goodness, i'm still bawling! heartache is so strong and powerful.....severus better get his shit together and go running after his witch!! can't wait for the next chappy =] your writing is as always, exquisite.
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  • From TemareiPM on April 09, 2009
    This was good good goood goooood gooooooooood chapter, and Severus is a raging idiot. Whatever he gets he deserves, because I know if I had been through the kind of absolutely abhorrent bullshit Herminone just went through, I'd be unleashing all holy hell. He really -really- REALLY hurt Hermione straight to the core.

    That being said, omg this was the best chapter thus yet! Please! Take your time with the next chapter if it'll be this good! Everything is at it's pinnacle now. Keep up the excellent writing!
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  • From ismene5 on April 09, 2009
    Phoawww, this was a great chapter.
    I nearly stopped breathing.
    And now, Mr. Snape?

    Please go on as quick as you can.
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  • From Rassgulla1 on April 09, 2009
    OMG! You had to leave it there! That is sooo evil! Please update soon!
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  • From Clairvoyant on April 09, 2009
    Divorce?! I didn't see that coming. I thought brave Gryffindor Hermione would tolerate anything, believing eventually she could wear him down. Which one thinks they are the bigger martyr? LOL Now she wants out. Severus will have a lot of back pedalling to do now. Why can't he just admit he's wrong. He's so stubborn, and he's never learned it only makes matters worse for him. He still thinks that happiness comes with too many strings attached or the fates will pull the rug out from under him. Men! Love the story, AV.
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  • From katiekrm on April 09, 2009
    Talk about cutting someone off at the knees! That was beyond cruel and he just kept going. Next Azkaban meal, Severus? Your balls roasted on a platter! Poor Hermione. This wait for the next chapter is going to be especially torturous. Well, Severus needed a good kick in his ass and he's sure going to get it. Kick him, Hermione, kick him!
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  • From MementoxMori on April 09, 2009
    Even though I've been an avid reader of this story since the beginning, I think this is the first time I've actually reviewed. This chapter made me cry, and that's not something that happens often...so congratulations? lol

    In all seriousness, I hope this doesn't end badly. Badly as in Hermione and Severus actually getting a divorce. That just seems too...easy. I could obviously feel Hermione's heartbreak but I also felt Severus' longing for her to come back there at the end. Let's just hope those two can work it out.

    Great job so far, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From dannilawless on April 09, 2009
    Wow!! That was so powerful. I could feel my heart breaking along with Hermione's. Well done. Loved it!!
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  • From neelix on April 09, 2009
    I'll take the hugs and the hankies. This chapter has me sobbing my heart out. I could really feel Hermione's pain, it was so real for me. And as for Saint bloody Severus. It would serve him bloody right if she doesn't go back. Why should she after he made her life seem a mockery?

    Brilliant chapter and so worth the wait... it's actually worth reading all of the other chapters JUST to get to this one. Well done, honey. You're a genius.
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