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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From Olwen on April 09, 2009
    Keep it up girl. You had me crying with this chapter, and I consider that a sign of really good writing.
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  • From wudelfin on April 09, 2009
    damn, I'm a mess. this chapter was just heart wrenching. *sniff* what bastard!! *snicker* now lets see if any wizard tries for her. oh the reaction!!!
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  • From theeloquentquill on April 08, 2009
    While this made me cry abut, and it breaks my heart that he is such an idiot, I hope you don't plan to have things just patch up quickly again. I mean, eventually,yes. But maybe in a few chapters?

    What ever you do, it will be lovely like the rest of this story :)
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  • From Kimjo2 on April 08, 2009
    poor hermione. i would have reacted the same way. but severus' social skills are so lacking it never occured to him she would have taken him in deadly seriousness. thank you for this wrenching update and i look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From DawnEB on April 08, 2009
    Oops, he's really gone and done it now, hasn't he?

    Trouble is, what will Hermione need to give him another chance? Because I can't see you leaving them like this. Mind you, it's a fairly dramatic way of forcing her out of her neediness and him out of his complacency - well done.

    Divorce - not when her business is so tied up in his property now. Not impossible for her to relocate, but she'll be in a worse state than she was before.

    I hope you won't have them suffer too much, too long.

    Some more lemons would be nice, too ;)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on April 08, 2009
    Wow. Each and every time he's been cruel to her before I at least partially understood it, at least from his point of view. But, this time...wow. IDIOT. He thinks he knows her so well, but obviously he missed the HUGE insecurity blanket she drags behind her. Hell, he just grabbed it and strangled her with it. I hope he's happy with his memories of both Lily and Hermione, because he's just lost his second witch. Dumbass!

    Still a a great story, hon! Thanks! HG4eva
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  • From roseredautumn on April 08, 2009
    D: oh noes! stupid Sev, look what you did! alhough, were I hermione, I probably would have blurted I loved him, and told him that the whole situation hadchanged. ah well.
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  • From Tenar10r on April 08, 2009
    Magnificent chapter!
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  • From TenderQuaintWitch on April 08, 2009
    Oh good God, you're killing me here! Seriously! If you insist on continuing down this path, you should take out stock in Kleenex. Sheesh. And I mean all that in the most loving way possible.
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  • From voraciousreader on April 08, 2009
    Ah, the wounded Severus has his revenge (vicariously) on the woman who rejected him. I've noticed that men who get rejected frequently have a relationship where they get to do the rejecting. It's 20-some years later, but he's finally done it. Bastard. Sexy bastard, but bastard. I do so love the convoluted psychology you've given him; it's just so perfect!
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  • From bibliobibuli17 on April 08, 2009
    Boo! BOO!!!
    I don't check your fic for a few weeks, so that I would have a significant chunk to read when I had some free time to just laze about...and this was the time I chose?? I need resolution! *weeps*
    That was WONDERFULLY written, you did incredible. I thought my heart was tearing in two with Hermione's, I cried and everything. Everyone has gone through something similar, has experienced those feelings of inadequacy. Severus was a fool to not realize what he was doing, how blind. He tore out her heart and stomped on it, and never even realized until he felt her feelings through the wards. What an oblivious man.

    Incredibly written, your characterization is spot on, sunshine. I can't wait for more!
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  • From randc9394 on April 08, 2009
    I wept the whole chapter. I cannot believe how emotional I became. I just couldn't believe Snape's cruelty.Poor Hermione
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  • From rini868 on April 02, 2009
    Flavours? What? I can
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  • From alientheet on April 02, 2009
    Awww only one more chapter since last time i checked? I'm dying here!!! I'm really enjoying this story. I appreciate the fact that you kept the characters real & gave them time to get to know each other at the start rather then taking the easy way out & have them been secretly in love for years. I'm really hanging to find out how hermione gets snape to agree to leave prison. Thanx for the good read!
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  • From Kimjo2 on April 01, 2009
    wow. i loved hermione's struggle. it felt very real. so is the healer's visit part of her cunning plan? it would be just like her! thanks so much for this superb update
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