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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From neelix on March 17, 2009
    What a sad birthday... Still, she did ask!
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  • From rini868 on March 17, 2009
    I remember when they first came out in the shops. I was still young enough to enjoy them immensely. I miss chocolate frogs; they should never have stopped selling them. We also had Bertie Botts but the flavours were pretty tame.

    Go Percy! Never thought I
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 16, 2009
    That was a beautiful use of the story name and it did make me feel for her. Although, honestly, I would love to be running a multi-billion dollar company, rather than working for one. lol But, then you got deep. Well, first you got a bit sexy, THEN you got deep. lol When it's put that way, I almost understand his desire to stay there. Sigh Hermione is so completely in her own head, often missing the bigger picture and hardly ever taking real risk with what's most important...her heart and the truth. Every time he says Lily's name I cringe for her, but as she is now, it would take something huge to make her tell him her worry and fear of being a poor substitute for a dead woman. That's gotta hurt.

    Great job again, my dear! Keep it up. Thank you. HG4eva
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  • From voraciousreader on March 16, 2009
    There is a reason that divorce is so high in military marriages. If you know why things were done, it might make it easier. Some things cannot be imagined or judged unless you were on the ground. Severus is very much a soldier, and that cannot be forgotten. If you have loved a man who has seen combat, either accept what he tells you, or leave him to find someone who can.
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  • From anncee on March 16, 2009
    a pleasure as always to read your work. it was something of a reality check to read, a little sad but entirely necessary. beautiful job! can't wait for the next chapter! oh and thanks for your concern of my grandmother, she's back home now and bustling around as usual =]
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  • From Kimjo2 on March 15, 2009
    lovely update. i do enjoy how you write severus' internal monologue. i have all belief this will end happily, one way or the other. you rule and reign! thanks so much
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  • From ANGELWINGZ1983 on March 15, 2009
    Fabulously written, so much so I had to break up the reading of chapters over the course of a week, when I could get online!! Can't wait to see if Sev DOES decide to leave or not........ Is it just me and Alebaster princess, or does writing the smut chapters for Sev come so natural??? Hmmmm, ponderment....... :P
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on March 12, 2009
    Yes... that is the best form of penitance. I shall have to participate in a similar activity later when My Snape returns from work. Thanks for the stimulation.
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  • From Heidi191976 on March 11, 2009
    A wonderful chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Rosedown on March 10, 2009
    I have enjoyed the story thus far. Your fiction focuses on character development, which usually becomes boring if not done well. Kudos to you for sustaining the character development in an interesting manner that makes us care about what we will see Severus and Hermione experience next. I have to confess that your latest chapter disappointed me though. Gay Harry and Prick Harry are so trite and cliche in H/S fan fiction. I just find it disconcerting that a talented writer can't come up with a more creative way to deal with Harry than to relegate him to the 'I'm a perpetually adolescent homosexual' corner. Shame on you! I was going to rank you right next to bloodcult_of_freud on my list of favorite authors. I'm going to have to wait until the end of the story to give my final assessment. You are too good a writer to take the hackneyed path!
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  • From DawnEB on March 10, 2009
    Having outlined Warden Blotts, I do hope we see something nasty happen to him before the end. Looks like Percy is on his case though.

    I shall attempt to wait patiently for the next chapter. *drums fingers on desk*
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  • From ladyjessamen on March 10, 2009
    okay, just caught up from where I left off (moving sucks) and I'm so glad I did. While there are some cringe worthy scenes in here it's because I can so easily put myelf into the story you're crafting so I expect it's only the mortification the characters themselves are feeling -- Hallmark of a great story in my opinion. Please keep up the good work. Much Joy -- WL
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on March 10, 2009
    Hah, those stupid witches should know that he's only Hermiones dark wizard! (I guess I'd have to queue up if I wanted a little piece of him, too? *sigh* Okay, okay, I'll get my own man. *pout*)

    Goodness, did anybody tell her that TALKING helps a lot to avoid misunderstandings? Well, I guess there is nothing like a tad of jealousy to keep a relationship spicy, but honestly. She shouldn't think that she's second choice! It's impressing how intelligent woman (witches) can be completely stupid and blind when it comes to Love!

    Yeah, right... Penitent. LOL

    Already waiting for the next update. Yeah, I know, next week. I'll be patient. Hm, more like I'll try to be patient... (At least at that pace I'll be able to review every chapter) ;-)
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  • From Clairvoyant on March 10, 2009
    AV, you are a superb writer with such lush detail and suspense. I love this story. I'll be sad when it ends. Any plans for your next project?
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  • From rini868 on March 10, 2009
    Just reading pittwitch's review: "Snape - the Wizarding World's Fabio" lol!

    And I agree with Voracious Reader. I'm glad Askaban is being looked into. The Warden should suffer, those poor children. I mean think about all the kids who weren't even at Hogwarts yet. They wouldn't have known much about house rivalries and Voldemort and killing people. They probably didn't even have wands yet and they were kissed because it was more economical this way! It really makes you angry >.
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