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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From MooMandy on February 21, 2009
    did I say that last chapter was hot? Well, compared to this one it was like a day in Anarctica. And this chapter a day on the sun! Fantastic! I can only imagine how intense it will be when they are finally able to completely consummate their bonds! Loving this! Happy writing, dear! Salud! Killer K
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  • From EleanorRigby13 on February 21, 2009
    Oh thank goodness, I was beginning to have symptoms of scurvy! Excellent excellent update, can't wait for the next!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 21, 2009
    Another great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From Persevero on February 21, 2009
    That was a brilliant chapter - the best SSHG first kiss *ever* (and believe me I've read a few) and then a superb cliffie. Gah, I'm gushing. Mazel tov, anyway!
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  • From theeloquentquill on February 21, 2009
    Oh these were a lovely set of last couple chapters:) wow.
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  • From neelix on February 21, 2009
    Oh that was wonderful... so glad there was no awkwardness and just an understanding that 'hey...we're almost shagging...let's do it again!'

    Really loving this story - and recommending it to my friends too!
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  • From robotnik1985 on February 21, 2009
    I'm out of date, as always, but feel like addressing it. I can understand why counting. And why backwards. The question is: why in Polish? I'm curious because I have already spotted my native language mentioned a few times in fics. And would like to know if there was a reason why you chose it. Difficult? Barbaric? Kind of... exotic?
    Although I would really like to hear SS trying to pronounce 'dziewięć' or 'sześć' :D
    Great work (as always), can't wait to have a little time to read the rest :)
    Belle
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  • From HermioneMalfoFan on February 21, 2009
    Oh my, oh my... This was HOT! Could I trade places with Hermione? Please?!

    By the way, I love the fact that Severus can feel how she is when she's home. I'd like to have something like that, too. It's not as if woman are the only ones hard to figure out, right? I somtimes wish for a detailed manual for men to. Around the lines of "How to descipher your boyfriend/husband" oh, and important, too, "How to make him understand you" ah, well, I guess the two of them need all the help they can get in their situation, right? Although - they are heading in the right direction now!!!

    I absolutely adore your Severus. He's so right when he said that Hermione didn't need his encouragement. It's unfortunately rare that a teacher does have such reasoning. I wish there were more teachers who discover talent and knowledge in shy students. They are so often underappreciated... Although I can understand her hurt. She certainly felt rebuffed.

    The chapter was really lovely. Lots of smut (yay) but still enough plot to see a developement in their relationship. In short, it was great to read!
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  • From Carlieisastreetmonster on February 21, 2009
    I'm enjoying more.
    Nothing else is needed.
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  • From alina290 on February 21, 2009
    I was so happy to see this chapter up. I had mentioned this story to my daughter and she asked me if it was up already and what had happened. I have not told her yet. I know she should read it for herself, but she just cannot get into the Harry Potter fic. She is more a Twilight fan. Loved this chapter. Enjoy your weekend and I know we all look forward to Monday. I do hope that Hermione understood his reasons for not making her his favorite student.
    Liz
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  • From CB13 on February 21, 2009
    Apollina dear,

    Back at a proper computer. Since I suspect many of the reviews have been the gushing type - oh, how dreadful, no pun intended - I will keep this short. *Excellent* work. As happy as I was to see the relationship progress at a natural level, I think it's safe to say that we were all getting antsy! Now all we have to do is move him out of Azkeban so they can have an actual shag.

    Nice how you outed Hermione's marriage (and husband) - to ambitious git at a competitor! That's gonna bite her in the butt for sure. I can't wait to see how.

    As Fat Tuesday approaches, I must scour the local bakeries for King Cakes. They don't fall out of the sky like in LA; you have to get out early and snatch them up, on The Day itself. I know, it does seem wrong, but there you have it.

    Thank you ever so much for sharing your marvelous talent with the rest of us.

    Cheers, and have a lovely weekend - CB
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  • From Kimjo2 on February 21, 2009
    there are just such times when a good show tune is the best way to express the joy of the moment! loved the yummy lemony goodness. thank heaven they finally came together (literally). thanks so much you wonderful evil genius,you!
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  • From andarte on February 20, 2009
    I love this story! It's very well written. :)
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  • From voraciousreader on February 20, 2009
    Lung cancer be damned, I smoked two.
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  • From chickaboo on February 20, 2009
    I can see Severus's point about Hermione in class. But I also understand why Hermione was like that. But the explanation of all of this would take more energy to write than I have at the moment. lol Great update, and it's great to be back and able to review again. Can't wait for more!
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