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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From ladyjessamen on February 20, 2009
    Thanks for the clarification ... I apologize for the dumb question. As soon as I read your response I had a literal head smack moment. Sometimes it can suck to be me. Regardless, excellent job again and I think I'll take the proffered cigarette - even if I don't smoke - Thank you! I guess I was wrong about the whole "brain kicking into gear" guess. In this instance though I'm quite happy I was wrong ... Just don't ever tell my brothers I said that - they'll make it a national holiday or something. I like how you gently point out both that Snape isn't such a bad guy and that Hermione is a little self absorbed with their conversation. Using the example of another student in her class who was just as smart but much less pushy was a brilliant stroke. I also laughed out loud about the singing the one part of the song she knew over and over - I'm prone to doing that a bit myself, it's a nice way to connect with your reader. Which, I might add, you're doing beautifully. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story as you get it written.
    Thanks -- WL
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  • From BarbossasBoots on February 20, 2009
    Lol, I'll have to decline that cigarette. Diabetes and smoking don't mix, mate.

    Great chapter...looking forward to the next.
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  • From Gertie on February 20, 2009
    More is in fact really, really good. I like more and would like
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  • From Heidi191976 on February 20, 2009
    An awesome chapter. I am glad that Severus and Hermione were able to get pleasure from each other. I hope that they continue to be with each other and that soon Hermione will insist that Severus needs to get his solicitor to help him get out of Azkaban so that he can go home to her. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From BarbossasBoots on February 20, 2009
    Lol, that was great...*very* hot.
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  • From iamtherealmaverick on February 19, 2009
    Damn, that was nice. Although I would have loved to know what Snape was thinking that prompted him to get so drunk. More please! ~M (And Billy, knowing to run away when the professor got *that look* in his eyes...how cute is that?)
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  • From Kimjo2 on February 19, 2009
    yikes! that was enough lemmony goodness for a half dozen pies and a handfull of tarts! please, i hope she doesn't reject him in the morning. superb update. thanks so much
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 19, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Gertie on February 19, 2009
    Gods be praised indeed! Do you know just how hard it was to leave for work this morning after reading this? I kept day-dreaming about it, and I do have to say it made my day a bit easier. I do wonder what the consequences of violating the Fidelity Charm would be. Not that she
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  • From EleanorRigby13 on February 19, 2009
    Oh. My. GOD. Phenomenal. Superb. Not enough ways to describe how AWESOME this chapter was!! Get back to writing, I'm drooling over here ;)
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  • From Carlieisastreetmonster on February 19, 2009
    You are a goddess. How I could have doubted you for even a moment is beyond me. Also, how on earth do you find the time to write so much? I can barely find the time between psychology essays and math homework to read your work.
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  • From tsorg on February 19, 2009
    Gods be praised indeed! What a hot, hot chapter! I'm with Snape, he did make her twitch and sing, she's just gotta want more at this point. AV this was simply one of the best build-ups to hotness I've ever read in a story! Awesome, awesome job, I love the way the feelings have evolved for the two of them. I'm glad Cristev is calling for ciggies all around, WHEW!
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  • From neelix on February 19, 2009
    YESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!! Severus, booze and Perfect Frotting.... (damn - should have entered the book title competition!)

    Awesome stuff!! *squeeing like a fan girl*
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  • From LiteraryBeauty on February 19, 2009
    Lovely, lovely! I managed to read this in one sitting, once I was hooked, I couldn't stop! And I think I was very patient (no...really) waiting for our beloved pair to come (no pun intended) to their senses.

    Excellent writing, and I'm really appreciating the Latin titles...I hate spoilers in titles because I always read them before I actually get to the specific chapter, so this is a fun way of avoiding that for me!

    Anyway, I'm excited to read more! Great work!
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  • From on February 19, 2009
    These are my words of encouragement. WRITE!!! I love this fic, and I can't possibly wait for more.
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