Click Here!

Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From robotnik1985 on February 15, 2009
    Hi, I wasn't there for a while and so much has happened!I love the way you picked names for the house elves from Disney cartoons. It somehow fits with Eileen and the way you explained her fascination with Muggle world (and gave her an opportunity to meet and fall in love with a Muggle)And how you tried to match the characters from Peter Pan with those from HP... Wormtail as Smee, really, he will never look the same for me! I love Disney cartoons and and never miss a chance to watch them with... ee... younger generation ;)just like Hermione with the elves :) I really appreciate the effort you and the others put to that story.
    Hugs, Belle
    Report Review

  • From ladyjessamen on February 15, 2009
    Well ... Damn I'm out of story. Good Stuff and now that I've managed to give you three reviews in a row, I'm thinking perhaps I should have waited until the end to post it all but really I probably would have forgotten half the things I wanted to talk about. Love the Demented Disney House Elves. Also I agree that I don't think of Rickman when I'm reading about Snape, be it canon or fanfic. Mostly I picture the cellist from Apocalyptica with the long dark hair, the one with the sexiest "wicked grin" in the "I Don't Care" video. It's on youtube if you so desire. Yum! Thanks for giving me another fanfic addiction. Please keep up the excellent work.
    Report Review

  • From ladyjessamen on February 15, 2009
    Okay, this is what I get for not reading everything. Just read the chapter with them musing on the nature of faith and redemption. As a cradle (and lapsed) Catholic I have to say I laughed so loud I think my neighbors heard it when I read about needing a "skypilot" to throw water on your head. 'M not sure that's what the most holy Pope Benedict the whatever (he'll always be Bishop Rat to me) would say about the subject but then who cares what an old virgin in Rome thinks? Excellent! Looking forward to catching up on the rest of the story. And since I managed to find this story on International Single's Awareness Day I can completely sympathize with Snape's dislike of the commercialization of this and most other holidays ... not that I appreciate the need SOME have of making everything about religion either. Still Good Job and believable characterization. Glad you have a couple of Betas now though, there were a couple of homonyms in the first few chapters that drove me up the wall. Keep up the excellent work.
    Report Review

  • From ladyjessamen on February 14, 2009
    Loving your story. I get at least one good laugh out of every chapter but this one hit especially close to home. I know what it can be like to crave even the simplest human contact, even from someone you wouldn't normally care to even think about "that way". I'm liking the way these two are bringing out the human in each other. You're doing an excellent job of showing how incredibly fragile human interaction is and how easily we retreat behind sarcasm and hostility to cover up just how uncomfortable we can be in interpersonal relationships. I think it's one of the strengths of this story. Too many authors gloss over how awkward most human interaction is, especially in situations where neither party is truly comfortable with the situation but both are unwilling to fess up to their respective misgivings. Good job all around.
    Report Review

  • From doodle on February 14, 2009
    It took the better part of two days but I have read the entire story to date. It is wonderful and I will try to wait patiently for the next update. I think I remember reading that you are in Shreveport. I am in New Orleans. Great to know LA produces such wonderful writers.
    Report Review

  • From Carlieisastreetmonster on February 14, 2009
    I'm all giddy now.
    How is Sev going to react to that? Ohh, I can't wait!


    I love you? Your writing? Naw, you. =]
    Report Review

  • From LCGrabski on February 13, 2009
    Woot! New chapter! (Sorry I can't add anything else. Too excited to think straight!)
    Report Review

  • From voraciousreader on February 13, 2009
    Uh-oh, nesting isn't quite the word, and if they explain to the elves why they can't say those things around the kids, won't they hurt themselves? And yes, a 'Death Eater approved' stamp would be a brilliant marketing ploy, since she's married to the last one! Tacky, but brilliant. Loving this, as always.
    Report Review

  • From nmos on February 13, 2009
    i'm glad that she's finally considering setting him free.
    to be perfectly honest, i've kind of been confused about whether or not she thinks he's guilty/deserves his fate throughout the story. like when she talks about him being able to leave any time he wanted, i've always gotten the impression that she means in his animagus form, not through his innocence. but at the same time it seems like she doesn't think that he murdered dumbledore. i've just been kind of puzzled on how if she does see him as innocent, she doesn't feel guilty, especially after he implied that part of the reason he was staying in azkaban was for her convenience. i don't know.
    this is kind of ramble-y
    but i do like your story. yay.
    Report Review

  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on February 13, 2009
    Yay! I can't wait. This is fantastic! I anticipate only the best from you, y'know! lol

    Thanks!
    Report Review

  • From Gertie on February 13, 2009
    Oh how I love the elves and would love to have them help raising my children. If I had eny. Or they were real. But you get the idea. So now comes the steps toward Snape's release I suppose. I hope so, I've had more then enough lip-biting anticipation and now they are all bloody. Bring on the smut I say.

    A bundle of daisies and a big box of hand rolled dark chocolate and raspberry truffles for you and all your lovlies.
    Report Review

  • From mamabear52 on February 13, 2009
    OOOhhh the children wish is there but what will Severus think of it if she tells him abput it ?? The suspense is killing us, come on now, when will he be free ??? Just out of curiosity, how many more chapters do we get before we see him free again ??? Keep writing, it keeps us on our toes or I should say our noses in the ''books'' so to speak. As my t-shirt says, '' just one more chapter '' before I can make myself do anything around the house. I hate cliffhangers! Please, hurry to the next chapter !!!!
    Report Review

  • From anncee on February 13, 2009
    aaawwwwwwwwwww does this mean our snapey will be comin out to play soooooooooon?!?! =] yes yes?
    Report Review

  • From CB13 on February 13, 2009
    Sister - is this your weekend to go to NOLA? If it is, have a great time! I am going to a cabin deep in the woods this weekend, so may not be able to read the new chap until Sunday night. Bother.

    Thanks for writing this really terrific story.

    Cheers,

    CB
    laizzes le bon temps roullez! (or something!)
    Report Review

  • From anncee on February 12, 2009
    hehehe i know i know! i loooooove that you update so much! i just love your writing and can't get enough of it =] another great chappie as always =]
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!