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Reviews for The Gilded Cage

By : ApollinaV
  • From tsorg on January 28, 2009

    Like he was David Bowie and Elton John rolled together....


    Now there is a visual! I can just see Voldemort in platform shoes, ziggy stardust outfit and big heart shaped sunglasses with a boa.
    I can also visualize Snape dropping acid and waking up with a tramp stamp. Oh Honey, the visuals you are creating with this chapter, thank you, thank you, it has picked up my day!


    I like seeing Snape feeling like he can finally open up, it's not just that confession is good for the soul but it's also the connection you've begun to build between the two of them, they are beginning to trust one another.


    On a side note, my valentine's honey when we were first together gave me on of those small Swiss Army knives and a roll of stamps. I was like, "What the F*CK!". Let me tell you what I thought I might do with my peachy keen gifts.... Fortunately for me and him, he knows better but we've been married a looong time and as I said before he does get brighter with age!


    Lovely, lovely story!

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  • From LadyofClunn on January 28, 2009
    *snerk* That is brilliant. Love ins.

    I can just see the Death Eaters at the return of Voldemort "Where are all the pretty colours??"

    Very nice story telling. I came back after a while and am absolutely delighted.

    Now, I am not British, but I live here, and one of my colleagues complained about her stupidity to get a "slag tag" as a tween. But I think tramp stamp should be fine.

    Great job!
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  • From neelix on January 28, 2009
    LMAO! OMG! ...LOL!!!... can't think of any more text speak to express my sentiments!!! As I was reading (and I apologise profusely...) Severus morphed into Alan Rickman...and then back again. This is not a bad thing you understand, Alan is my first and one true love (apologies to mr neelix!) The 70's references, the drugs...the 'thank god it doesn't say MUM' tatoo...

    This chapter has me rolling in the aisles... that and the half-bottle of fizzy rose....


    Awesome work as usual... what's he going to rub next honey???
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  • From elladee on January 28, 2009
    Things seem to be getting more interesting now! I have to admit, I stopped reading this for a few weeks, around the time when Hermione spoke to Dumbledore's portrait; the pace is a little slow for me, so it seems to be better when I read a handful of chapters in one sitting so that things move along a bit more haha. Still, the concept is working well and I'm glad to finally see some romantic/sexual chemistry developing. I think I'll keep reading!
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  • From tsorg on January 28, 2009


    Severus actually likes Valentine
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  • From ripley on January 28, 2009
    how could you stop there? it was a downright snapeworthy level of meanness. i suppose i shouldn't complain since your getting into character so i'm going to beg instead. please write more and soon.
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  • From theeloquentquill on January 27, 2009
    Welcome to Knoxville :) how are you liking it? Don't forget to go to the Old City or to Turkey Creek :p


    I love this chapter! But she really has to let his death eater status go if there is to be any hope of them having a serious future. And she shouldn't throw that back in his face like that. :/

    Brilliant chapter, though. The gift was perfect
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on January 27, 2009
    OK...it has come to my attention that your Snape and I are two of a kind. I had a discussion about Valentine's Day that eerily resembles Snape's internal dialogue in that last chapter. Isnt it funny how several pagan rituals were turned into modern day commercialized/Christian holidays? I may as well buy myself an oversized black cloak and strut around, I already snark at people....(cant stand people in general)...yup, I am a female version of Snape....


    Oh, love the pearl necklace innuendo....Just had to explain that to an older, rather prudish friend of mine...that was fun hehe....


    Happy Writing!
    S_G
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  • From EleanorRigby13 on January 27, 2009
    I love love love this story!! I have gotten teary eyed, laughed and snorted out loud over this story and can't wait to read the rest. And OMG, I was dying over the pearl necklace...the song instantly popped into my head, thank you very much for the ear worm!
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  • From pittwitch on January 27, 2009
    MORE! Must have more revelations and closing in on the smut!
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  • From phoenixrhapsodyv3 on January 27, 2009
    That's a terrible place to leave us!!!!! Aaaah! Don't you love us more than that?! Now I have to pout around for another few days. Oh well, I'm confident that you will post more quickly. Thank you, thank you so much!
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 27, 2009
    That was written beautifully. I could feel the tension between the two as I read it. I look forward to Wednesday to see how they bollocks it up this time. lol Thanks!
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  • From LadyDisdain on January 27, 2009
    Very interesting story! You make Severus sound almost human ;) that's just scary !

    Can't wait for another update ;)
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  • From Gertie on January 27, 2009
    *giggles I don
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  • From dannilawless on January 27, 2009
    Love the chapter. 'Hermione Baiting@ brilliant. Poor Severus didn't get his puppy. Poor little fella.
    Oh and the 'coddle', I didn't think it existed outside Ireland. I mean its boiled sausages and rashers in a potato soup, I kept wishing it was a figment of my imagination, that it wasn't real but alas......
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